Reviews for Out in the Cold |
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starlite22 chapter 4 . 5/17 Enjoying it, but you need to edit his bones are coated in Adamantium not aluminium. |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/3 You have a really promising plot here, but you really need a Beta/Editor. You're making a lot of very basic spelling, grammar, and other writing errors that really affect the readability of your work ("strips" when you mean to say "stripes," among others). It's difficult to get into the story when I'm having to mentally edit in my head to even understand what you're trying to say. |
Melody-Rose-20 chapter 9 . 4/22 There's always so much to Logan and Sabertooth's back story. |
DeathCrawler chapter 9 . 4/22 nice chapter look forward the next ones |
Algum ser chapter 8 . 3/26 One of the best stories I've read. Congrats and hope you update soon |
Guest chapter 8 . 3/4 Just found this story, loving it! Update soon |
DeathCrawler chapter 8 . 1/20 great to see this updated again look forward the next chapter |
LiasonFan2 chapter 4 . 12/1/2019 Good story but you desperately need spell check please fix |
starlite22 chapter 7 . 10/17/2019 Please keep going. |
DeathCrawler chapter 7 . 8/19/2019 interesting story and look forward the next chapters |
X.summergrey.X chapter 7 . 8/15/2019 Ohh. Really digging this. I wonder if they will run into the xmen. I'm sure saber tooth will show up again. |
roksanamaryslytherin chapter 7 . 7/26/2019 Oh my God! I'm in love with this story! Update soon! Please please please |
MommyMayI chapter 7 . 7/23/2019 Great story. Thanks for updating. I was wondering when someone would catch up with them. When I learned magneto was down for the count I thought maybe there would be no trouble. Good diversion. Thank you for writing |
starlite22 chapter 6 . 3/28/2019 Great so far, It’s been a while, but I hope you continue at some point. |
JaliceJelsa4eva chapter 5 . 3/13/2016 Good job. Will they ever meet up with the others? |