such a good chapter! pls update soon.

Please continue this story

Dead?

What a great read! I really liked this redemption arc as well as the canon one! This is old so it probably won't be continued, but if it does... I'm up for it!

Wow continue please

Lol, I suppose that is one way of being found out. I was just wondering how long Steven was going to manage to keep Peridot hidden to!

Honesty, for all the incredible intelligence the gems possess some of their reactions to earth technology/habits is just so ridiculously funny.

Why would peridot get brain freeze when she has no brain? Well unless you mean gem freeze which would be worse since a gem is the the cumulation of a Gems being. Still, they are not strictly organic.

I love your story, but Steven's healing powers shouldn't have worked on Peridot's finger if they weren't part of her body. Any way. This chapter was creative.

i neeeeeeeeed more

this must be before you figured out her hands were actually just limb enhancers

Aww! Please update Rinna! This is literally THE BEST Peridot redemption story I've ever read! I always check your profile every once in a while to see if you ever update. Heh. You don't though. Now that I finally made an account here in fanfiction, I decided to put you on alert just in case that maybe. Just maybe, you would update this art once again

I hope this isn't the dreaded " author's existence failure '. I really wanted to know how your story goes. I keep waiting every now and then to see if you ever updated your profile. But till this day, nothing seems to be happening. You created a poll that you specifically stated that you'll close it on valentines day, but it's early in november now! Are you okay!?

Please PM me if your still there! I need to know you're okay. I won't give up hoping that one day, that 15th chalter will be up, I still am. Please Rinna, if your still there, don't dissapoint your hundreds of readers, we're still waiting for you, y'now :'(

Thanks RinnaCarebim! I usually read this story to get a good idea to how to write a redemption story! so thanks!

Hi RinnaCarebim! I'd just like to say that I am falling in love with your story! I hope you update is soon! I don't want this beautiful story to die like this : (

Also, unrelated question, but how old are you? Please answer! If you're still alive that is

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