This is so messy. Character changes inconsistently - and disagree with how your characters have reacted to situations. 1) Ciel shouldn’t be apologising to Alois - he said something which was what? The truth? Yeah it might’ve been a tad mean but it was tiny compared to what Alois did. And why the hell is Ciel feeling bad AFTER Alois went all the way to rub it in his face. Ciel is vengeful - eve. If he has feelings for Sebastian - he wouldn’t make it easy. He’d be more resistant after seeing him with Alois. This sounds more like an Asian drama - that’s not a compliment. I’m jndian and have watched those stupid shows which make no sense - and this has a horrifying similarity to them.

Holy crap! I love this! It was so well written!

what? what?! it cant just end there

Brillant freaking brillant ! I absolutely loved this ! :D well done not only did u mange to add a spice girls ref ! This was the first school AU i read of this pair and i loved it . Well done have you done anymore of this pair ?

No matter what anyone says aloies was being a bitch to sleep with a guy you know your friend likes just to make someone jealous come on man get yourself together he cheated on you why would you want him back I mean ciel said some real insensitive stuff but it was true and you know what people say the truth hurts.

I love this!

Excellent. I'd been avoiding reading this story because your summary didn't give me much to go on and I didn't know if it would be any good and I just didn't know where it would go, but you are an amazing writer.

Oh my god, this fanfic was just amazing, I loved it

Great story! Why did it have to end *crying rainbow of emotions* waaaaah! . . . All better now :D anyways... Great story hope u do more of these in the future

so perfect for those two!

Aw I didn't want it to end! Loved it!

THE END?! NOOOO PLEASE NO! MOOOOORE! Ahem, sorry about that. Thank you for writing one on my favorite fanfictions. This was great. It really was.

that was so sweet

Their lines of you're foul, you're disgusting, appalling & repulsive seemed a little off following the heartfelt confession from Sebastian. /

No, don't cry Sebastian! My poor demonic bb...Ciel if you don't cuddle the shit out of this insecure adorable demon thing I will cry.