| Reviews for The Swift Prodigy |
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Amaterasususano chapter 31 . 7/6 Need an update on this asap |
kamui5 chapter 31 . 6/23 Excellent chapter, looking forward to reading more. |
GoldeN ViZionZ chapter 17 . 6/22 I hate how you had Naruto show up late to the chuunin exams, it makes him look like an arrogant asshole who thinks he is better than everyone when he is not and it also shows he is not ready for chuunin |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 31 . 6/10 Well, things are really heating up but why would Ay's pops have left something in Uzushiogakure I wonder and just what is this artifact, and was it true that the Namikaze's had a hand in Uzushiogakure's downfall, only Naruto knows of this it's a shame if it's true also means there not as genuine as I thought if they accepted money to help in it's destruction, I wonder what happens next, should be interesting. |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 30 . 6/8 Well, that was so un-cool Naruto got his ass handed to him not to mention lost his cool sword. |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 29 . 6/7 Well, that was pretty cool Yugao really kicked ass it was pretty cool, now it's Yugito's turn against Jun wonder how that will go. |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 28 . 6/7 Well, things are hotting up wonder what that was about with Jiraiya or was he just worried about the main fight who knows and can't wait for more. |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 27 . 6/5 Well, that was interesting seemed abit like cell with that tail lol |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 26 . 6/5 Well, that was quite an enjoyable chapter all of them having fun slaughtering Pedomaru's rejects, and who is this person who's about to face Naruto and calling him brother should be interesting. |
Freddielebron chapter 16 . 6/4 If he doesn’t learn FTG from Minato, what was even the point of keeping him alive? |
Freddielebron chapter 15 . 6/4 I find it weird how they have had 3 years in a position where they have to kill often and you haven’t shown any character growth from that at all. They are still highly “virgin” when it comes to killing which is very surprising. This is an M rated novel and the fact that you just ignore their character growth is just... wow |
Freddielebron chapter 14 . 6/4 Oto didn’t exist until Orochimaru got kicked out of the Akatsuki because he went after itachis eyes. Since he didn’t go after them, then he should still be a part of the Akatsuki. Oto was just a backup plan he made because he failed. If you’re just gonna spam the same canon events and put them in a different time period that’s very... original of you. Don’t make naruto be born before canon naruto and then not have the creativity to make up new events. Like the land of snow. That was when canon naruto was 12-13. You made that happen 8 years before canon which doesn’t make sense at all and there was no new events which would make sense for it to happen like manipulation. You just copy and pasted the movie and made it years ahead. |
Freddielebron chapter 14 . 6/4 Oto didn’t exist at this time |
Freddielebron chapter 13 . 6/4 Theoretically by naruto canon, the only ranks in bingo books are S class. The rest don’t get ranks. You are either a missing nin or an S class threat. S class are international threats to other villages. Missing nin are people who leave the village and have to be killed or brought back to prevent village secrets from being out or say that person gets captured by enemies and those secrets get extracted from them. Other villages don’t label people as anything other than S because to get into the book they have to be a legitimate threat. Not a future threat. But a current threat. It’s why Itatchi wasn’t listed until he became a missing nin because he was a threat to all villages. He was just considered a prodigy at the time. |
Freddielebron chapter 12 . 6/4 And just like that, naruto went super saiyan 1 |