I cried while reading this and I actually really love this book already but I have never read any far us books before but I already love this.

xD, love it

This is so cute,, I love this.
Freed just so faithful and make Laxus realize that his so in love with him. Kyaaa .

Oh sweet Freed, that hurts even more.

You're the constant, but you are also the option.

just love this one so much ! its so cute! :D

THAT WAS THE CUTEST EFFIN STORY I HAVE READ THIS YEAR :DDDD THAT WAS SERIOUSLY JUST..DKFHFKSHF AMAZING.

such a sweet ending for this story. Thank you.

I didn't tear up, no ma'am, not a bit.
That was beautiful.
Thank you for another wonderful story.
X. Aud

NO! It's OVER?! That was such an amazing story though! I absolutely loved it and it would be awesome if you thought about a sequel, perhaps? Either way, the story was great. It was pretty well thought out and had a good plot line too. Fantastic work!

Awe~! The ending was so sweet! I'm honestly touched that Laxus was so worried he raped him, and was so relieved to learn it wasn't what it seemed, just an attack from leeches... but that's another scary thing in itself. Anyway, great job!

Looks like Laxus has finally calmed down and gotten his act together. Excellent ending point. At least Laxus has finally figured out he can indeed love another man and is settling down the right way. :)

About time the man figures a few things out. LOL. Only Laxus could be such a goof ball in his egotistical struggles to decide what he feels. Good grief over everything from how Laxus threw up on Freed and all the rest of the craziness Laxus and rum caused the previous night tells me that Laxus should not be drinking hard liquor ever again. Poor Freed.

Wow. So things are getting a bit crazy now. Can't help but wonder why they can't simply agree to change certain rules and not have to go through all of this round about headache making nonsense. . . And yet it really is very in character for then both to do everything the round about way.

Still think Laxus needs to be smacked upside his overly prideful head over this stunt he's pulling, but I sure hope it will prove to the egomaniac that his pride's nowhere as important as the people who do care for him in the end.

Okay. now I am wondering if Laxus has begun obsessing in his own right. These mixed signals really should be driving poor Freed up a wall. I begin to think that Laxus isn't as straight as he likes to claim and is making Freed miserable because he doesn't want to admit he's curious. Stubborn dragon slayer to the bone if you ask me. :)

Gotta love Freed's sense of humor. Such a punishment is hilarious and downright evil. LOL.