Bruh. Okie: this is the 3rd time I’ve read this fic. It makes me cry every time. You writing is beautiful. Honestly. I typically say “good” books are the ones that make me stop and think. Think about my life, and think about philosophy, which is a passion of mine.
This is a good story. You did well. 10/10 recommend.

loved this story! it was very well written and I enjoyed it immensely. I can see myself re reading it sometime in the future

Go fucking die ass hole and don't forget to take this monumental trash heap with you

This is amazing and has been an absolute pleasure to read! Xx

Good story

That was awesome

Really touching and good story. I wouldn't have been upset if Ichigo died, you really made him make peace with himself really well. I was ready to accept a sad ending for Ichigo. Poor mod soul.
Anyways, keep up the great work, in any future works or projects!

What a great story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, from start to finish! Thank you for writing it

Thank you for writing and finishing this wonderful piece. I've been looking for an angst fic where Ichigo getting betrayed by Soul Society and stuff, and yours is by far the best one. Most fic often painted captains as heartless jerks and Ichigo suddenly went crazy for revenge, which is totally OOC. You really manage to capture everyone there. Especially the platonic relationship between Ichigo and Urahara, their dialoque is very nicely craft(I read it while listen to Persona5 ost Regret, and damn it fits so well I almost cried). This is why Ichigo is my fav chara in entire fiction, reading this really makes me happy. I read this in one go and probably there's many thing I want to comment on, but the previos comment by Nirvana have managed to convey what I want. So I just want to leave the comment here in case someday you might want to reconsider writing a sequel for this? Honestly, this fic is perfection. thanks for putting it out here.

Could not stop smiling there at the end. I really loved that- a great, fulfilling ending, that wasn't extremely cheesy.
Keep it up _

I like your story thanks

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I read the whole story in one go and I genuinely enjoyed it. In most I've read, on this and other sites, all portray at least some of the Gotei 13 as the enemy, but you made them helpful and driven in favor of fixing the wrong, instead of having them seem careless and uninterested. As well, you portrayed the characters personalities and, in the more main characters of the story, their personal habits in enough detail and time that it didn't become an exaggeration. (I think most stories tend to go a bit overboard on how Kurotsuchi wants to experiment and study Ichigo)

The Steady increase of complications to Ichigo's condition, followed well by the gradual solving of said problems worked well to bring the story along. The telling of Ichigo bouncing between recovering and his bouts of inner turmoil, slipping into his both acceptance of his possible death and his will to try to live through it all was very well done. Also his natural desire to protect instead of hurt, but ultimately doing what has to be done, shown in his dealing with the Mod Soul wrapped up the drama of his release and sickness greatly. His friends entry at the end after choosing the road he would take from then on was a nice, happy, and simple way to essentially show that he was ready to start the next part of his life. The simplicity of the ending paragraphs finished the story beautifully.

I look forwards to any new writing for this or any new stories you may begin.

Beautiful!

Oh my. Oh my my. I read this all in one go and it was so amazingly written and you had mentioned possible sequels so obviously I went to your profile to check out if there were any... and there weren't. And I was immediately depressed because obviously this meant the ideas got abandoned before I checked and realized that THIS WAS FINISHED AT THE END OF LAST YEAR. Not in like 2012 as I'm used to these things being. So. SO. There's plenty of hope for those sequels yet after all? Oh my, I'm so excited about that rn!

I obviously loved the story very very much. I'm a sucker for these sorts of stories and the plot (the unjust imprisonment and the angst in dealing with that and then extra crap that crops up but all of it still written in a way that the angst is just the right amount and doesn't leave you sobbing and depressed for days after reading it. My favorite).

I loved the way Gotei 13 aren't the villains at all in this, even the old geezer, and are rather supportive all the way through. It's far too easy to turn at least some of them into stubborn, ungrateful fucks but you avoided that and it felt like a breath of fresh air.

I loved what you created between Ichigo/Hichigo/Zangetsu. It was fascinating to read and such a great idea to have Ichigo escape into his Soulscape while he was imprisoned. I mean, duh, of course it was, but I just thought I'd point out the obvious.

I loved how you still show just enough of Rukia, Renji, Isshin and so on for their presence to be very adequately felt, but not enough to distract from the main thing.

And of course the main thing itself. The relationship between Ichigo and Urahara and how slowly and steadily and elegantly it builds into something so damn beautiful... You managed to make it progress so naturally. I mean, okay, obviously I ship them so hard but even though in this story it didn't turn into more, it was still so perfect even for me (but uhm _ would it? In the sequels? Turn into more, I mean. Obviously I'd read anyway but just uhm, *cough*, out of innocent curiosity...)

So yeah, I think this story deserves a much longer comment from me but I'm about to start really rambling, so I better quit while I'm ahead. I really hope to see more from you at some point!