did she just accidentally turn into Ripjaws?

seems like a fun testing of what Heatblast can do, but wouldn't all that sand get turned into glass? or molten glass? By the way what is your personal favorite alien and watch design? Mine would be either XLR8 or Upgrade with Alien Force's version of the watch being my preferred watch look

good prologue and i interested in how you changed that canon event, hopefully more butterflies occur

HOLY...CANT WAIT FOR MORE..

Does Vilgax (I think that's the right, Octopus Guy) still exist?

any plans for an update?

Oops rip jaw or something. Interesting story, I look forward to what you do with it.

mmm wow

MORE MORE MORE I DEMAND MORE MORE MORE

Get your ass outta there Taylor.

Hmm. An entire chapter of Taylor freaking out followed by an Omnitroll. At least the rambling seemed genuine enough. Not bad, but I'm still looking forward to seeing who showed up and how they'll react to Taylor's new form. Thanks for the chapter!

...Wow, either this is one of the worst cases of adrenaline fueled mistakes I've seen in a while, or Taylor just got hit with the stupid stick. I'm leaning towards the stupid stick for her preparation, and the adrenaline for her current panic. Aaaand the panic, you did a great job getting that through in the chapter. It was oozing out of my screen almost.

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Interesting start

Imma say it's RipJaws because the omnitrix likes to be a douche every once in a while no matter who wields it :P