Reviews for Who Knew |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2017 Tag yourself I'm the nurse |
callmecharley chapter 1 . 6/26/2016 Awesome job! |
kaila5707 chapter 1 . 7/23/2015 Love itt! so so sweet and fluffy |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 Sweet and adorable. I loved your writing. : ) |
gamilton chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 Cute and sweet! Emma doesn't have much of a filter when she is fine and hasn't hit her head or anything else. |
telle17 chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 Hey there! That was an interesting piece. You have a very nice style, really fluid, that makes ready you very easier. I find, though, that you could have worked a little more on the end. The beginning is just the right length, but the final part, where Emma asks Regina out, it's... I don't know, maybe they should have been mistaken a few more times for a couple. You could have developped how embarrassed/shocked they were that they would be confused for a couple, and then how they would reflect upon it... Plus, medication is always a great way of removing any filter, so you could have kept the same excuse for a little later. I'm not saying the way you said it was bad, because it wasn't, clearly, it just... seemed rushed, not as good as the rest of the fic. Anyway, have a nice day, and thanks for sharing! |
Trudy Rulez chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 I loved the story, thought is ended a bit fast, but I liked it anyway. I could imagine this scene with those two. |
rondaday1 chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 Aww adorable |
MelSQ23 chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 I loved it! |