Reviews for Who Knew
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
Tag yourself I'm the nurse
callmecharley chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
Awesome job!
kaila5707 chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
Love itt! so so sweet and fluffy
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
Sweet and adorable. I loved your writing. : )
gamilton chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
Cute and sweet! Emma doesn't have much of a filter when she is fine and hasn't hit her head or anything else.
telle17 chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
Hey there!
That was an interesting piece. You have a very nice style, really fluid, that makes ready you very easier.
I find, though, that you could have worked a little more on the end. The beginning is just the right length, but the final part, where Emma asks Regina out, it's... I don't know, maybe they should have been mistaken a few more times for a couple. You could have developped how embarrassed/shocked they were that they would be confused for a couple, and then how they would reflect upon it... Plus, medication is always a great way of removing any filter, so you could have kept the same excuse for a little later.
I'm not saying the way you said it was bad, because it wasn't, clearly, it just... seemed rushed, not as good as the rest of the fic.
Anyway, have a nice day, and thanks for sharing!
Trudy Rulez chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
I loved the story, thought is ended a bit fast, but I liked it anyway. I could imagine this scene with those two.
rondaday1 chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
Aww adorable
MelSQ23 chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
I loved it!