Oh my gosh. What is this?! My heart is being torn apart by your lovely, heartbreaking writing! I think one of the main reasons I don't ship Gruvia is because of how torn apart I get everytime Gray is annoyed by her and I can't help but put myself in Juvia's shoes and practically feel myself dying like how you described how desperate and helpless Juvia was waiting for an answer for Gray. I personally think it would be better for Juvia's character if she moved on from Gray but she truly doesn't know the meaning of give up. Mashima-sensei please make Gray fall for her in a believable way and make him apologize for all times he was cold to her. Otherwise I would continue to think Grayza would've been the better side pairing next to NaLu.

Anyhow, are you planning on writing anymore stories? This is so good, I literally felt pain in my chest. Imagine what you would do to me if you wrote long multichapter fic. Besides, I really want to learn from you :D

THIS WAS TOO DAMN GOOD OMG. I'm not going to be able to get this out my head for the next month. The way you write is so frickin raw... how do you do it?! I could feel everything Juvia was—her pain, frustration, anguish, despair, the absolute suffering.
And when Gray walked away, I swear it felt like my heart was being ripped apart, not Juvia's!

Job well done!

omg, i came to your profile because you reviewed one of my fics (thank you, btw!) and ahhHHHH. this was so beautifully written but so heartbreaking. amazingly done!

Did you make the sequel, because it really Great and Don't delete it! But will you make a sequel?

This is actually really good. Yeah it's dark and angsty and I feel for Juvia, but I loved it. It was well written and just amazing.

Well done.