Omg for some reasons, the last chapter felt so satisfying. I have always felt that Riza would be the type to not want kids. I don't know why but maybe I just wanted my favorite character to be like me. I love the concept soooo much because finally, I can relate to my Queen. ( for the record, I don't hate kids. I just don't want them, i can't explain why )

"My anaconda only wants your buns,hun" JAGSFDAHJGSFDHAGJDFHG I DIED

ADFSGFA OMG THIS CHAPTER IS PERFECT ...THE KIDS GASFAGJH AND OMG ED ASDF I LOVE HIM ... ALSO ROY BEING SCARED BY GHOSTS MAKES ME LAUGH SO HARD ASFDFHGJH

Just have to say, thank you for the most realistic sex scene written in the history of ever, hahahaha. Just got into this story and really liking it so far, as well as your writing style. The only thing that I don't get is if they are in a secret relationship or not, it seems like they are but at other times it doesn't, but I guess I'll just have to keep on reading to see that for myself :)

I’ve loved all of this! Just tore through it till I reached the last chapter! I love that you included the kids too! Roy is such a sweet boyfriend, it’s too cute. And although there were a lot of sadder moments in the last two chapters I think you did a great and believable job of handling them. Can’t wait for more!

Kind of an odd twist. Basically every future fic agrees that Riza is an excellent mom, and Roy loves kids. Which usually means the art is adorable, however the logic here is sound enough. Riza, for all her good, is probably not ready to be a mom and especially not right out of college. And yeah, Roy is a little put out, but the Royai ship sails because true love has them fight a war, start a second, and stand by each other through both despite not having a traditional intimacy.

So, cool twist, logic is sound, drama is solid, but true love wins. I like it.

I've been waiting for frever for a update. You're. Not stopping here right? Please continue i love too much

THAT WAS AN AMAZING CHAPTER! I have been following your story for years and every 6 months or so I go through and reread everything from start to finish! Seeing the notification come through that you updated made my day! This was a great, emotion-filled and moving chapter that nearly made me cry! I loved the little tidbit on necromancy and all I thought of was human transmutation and AHHHH! Great job and I can't wait for more!

Hi! I've read your other fanfics, and one thing I can say is that your writing never failed to shake my feels! After reading this made me want to have such a caring and adorable boyfriend just like how you characterized Roy in the story! Hahaha~

Kudos to you and looking forward to your update!

One of my favorite chapters yet!

Oh gosh, what a sweet chapter! Poor Rebecca, she just wants to take care of Jean and she can't do it without yelling. I loved it. Really lovely job, dear.

I love how you worked in the Elrics into this :D

I love this au a lot and the writing is amazing! This was another great chapter and i'm thankful to you for writing this!

I loved this chapter so, so much (though it took me long enough to review it). I just love the way you portray Roy in this; so gentle and caring, especially during their most intimate moments.

The whole premise of this chapter was wonderful and so perfectly executed! I am so looking forward to what else is in store for these two!

aw that was adorable, i love this fanfic so much. it's so good and fluffy, and i always look forward to reading new chapters