Yay cute like fluffy fluff

A great ,feel good, read for the student on the go. Art work is really cute.

So short, it's just the beginning.

So sweet, it rots your teeth.

So simple, a child could read it.

Keep up the good work!

Has this story been tested by the FDA, cuz im pretty the sweetness levels here cause...you know what, that joke is too crass. Lovely tale of a bunny and her knight.

needs a sequel

MOAR

So this was to be a quick fluff and not a lemon. Maybe in the next season they'll go deeper in detail towards the other characters.

The only bad thing in this fanfic was Velvet.

Too sweet, OOC and... it simply didn't make much sense. You should have tried a bit harder to explain her feelings rather than just telling us that Velvet loves Jaune because you say so.

very sweet and in character :)