continue the fanfiction plsss..

huh.

Interesting story. I really hope you continue with the series and I see great potential in this story.

Awesome job

nice job

nice job with the first chapter!

Hey there, love the fic so far! Just wondering, is Ichigo any stronger with a sword? I mean, it was his main weapon for literally the whole series regardless of where he was, and he was capable of going head-to-head with literally century-old beings skill-wise. It just makes sense to me that he would be stronger with a sword. Keep up the good work anyhow.

Nice chapter and setting it up so that Ichigo has some help training his friend.

Nice chapter and setting it up so that Ichigo has some help training his friend.

The fic is going well so far, and this chap has been a filler of sorts...

I wonder what Ichigo can offer here with his vast experience in live death defying combat...he must have some significant advantage over them, he has been in deaths doors twice, with that kind of hardcore experience, naturally he would have significant advantage over them.

As for pairings, that's your call on who he should be with and I just hope its not a harem setting, that would kill off Ichigo's character plus it would be HELL for you to characterize (character development part) each and everyone of them to make it sensible or believable.

Personally (my opinion), I don't know if Ichigo and Moon Young is a good catch unless she stops being so forward and tease 24/7. I doubt Ichigo likes extremely forward women...but maybe you could work it with developing her character or modifying a bit.

More importantly...no one really has seen Ichigo in action, at least the main cast.

Another think is Ichigo's father is NOT really human one tiny bit and this automatically makes Ichigo an inhuman being. In cannon Ichigo never lost his shinigami powers but his powers just got too depleted and like Isshin too who lost his power at one point, Ichigo too would have had his power back after some years or so...I mean, he cannot just unbecome being a half shinigami and half quincy, his powers were simply dormant once again. His other Shinigami buddies only jump-start the process of recovering his power by piercing him with a reishi sword.

The point is; as Ichigo is NOT human, he wont be getting getting sick like normal people do...he'd have some advantage like some minuscule accelerated healing than normal people and such.

Thanks for the chapter. It was pretty good, looking forward to the next one.

Well I can see what you mean about English not being your first language, but at least your grammar isn't horrendous.

As for the story itself? Its okay, but you don't update enough for me to truly say much more.

As for pairing? Ichigo x Moon Young, NO Harem.

Wonderful!

Good chapter, looking forward to chapter 4!

A decent start.