Okay, keeping this short and sweet here. First off, great idea for fanfic. Secondly, the characters retained most of their personality- which I LOVE. Thirdly, any fanfic of KumaDust is awesome to me. Lastly, it leaves me wanting more- in a good way. More of the story, and the continuation of it would be pretty solid here, if the writing style is anything to base this off of. Overall, great fic and great writer who wrote it.