Reviews for Twice the Hero
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2019
Have ben use the Nemetrix to become a root shark in the future!
christopherrhaydon chapter 6 . 2/20/2019
Please update ASAP awesome work
Guest chapter 2 . 11/9/2018
ContinĂșa la historia por favor
Hz chapter 6 . 12/25/2017
Very good. _
Anonyman chapter 1 . 10/23/2017
Heh, I wonder if Khyber would view Ben as a prey, a predator or a potential student. He always viewed Ben as the Ultimate prey, seeing him completely become a savage beast while keeping control of himself might change his mind
Anonyman chapter 6 . 10/23/2017
I can understand. The hardest part in being a writer is... well, writing itself, and you don't want to mess it up, so you do this to back yourself up. It's normal, since you want to give us something cool to read. Heh, don't be too harsh on yourself tho, this story is like a Marvel movie. It's amazing and even if you did a mistake, we'd still enjoy your writing. Good luck/Break a leg/[insert words of encouragements]!
See ya!
Guest chapter 6 . 9/11/2017
Please continue the story pls pretty plz
darkfang79 chapter 6 . 6/30/2017
plz continue da story
Indominus chapter 6 . 1/28/2017
Are you going to continue this story and if you are I hope you update it as soon as you can please and thank you
nocturnoomega369 chapter 1 . 1/19/2017
How About Sly Warp And Armoropterria And Dashslicer? You Should Add Them To The Nemetrix!
king cool 12 chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
you need re watch omniverse being it gotten more matured
Nemitrix011 chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
Chapter:1 Review
Really enjoyed your writing great job, enjoyed your use of time skips a lot!
Will Ben lose control again in future chapters I wonder ?
Rogue Deity Master chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
I used to work with a person who made aliens for a Ben 10 series, I know one predator that could be useful or just for fun.
Rexfan1333 chapter 5 . 10/28/2016
Great chapter and can't wait for more.
knightsofsprite chapter 5 . 10/27/2016
This series is pretty great hope to read more
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