Nice one Jack

Great story. Love it.

I was laughing so hard. This is good. More?

Love Jack's interior monologue, sounds just like him. Can't believe I had this in my favorite stories list and didn't review it, please forgive me.

aw! that was cute and funny! hehehe...yay! they sure showed makepeace didn't they!

This was really funny! My favorite lines were: "Oh I don't , don't I?"

"That's 'do I?', and Makepeace is different. He used the 'F' word and threw my KV55 chronicles through the wormhole to P3X 621."

He did WHAT?

To my geek?

and

That's damn immature. Damn stupid.

And I'm damn proud.

good job! I couldn't stop laughing!

*giggle* how nice of Jack:)

C. You have a nice feel for short snippets. This was clever and original. I especially liked Jack's remark: "To my geek?" Always have known he has a very soft spot for Daniel. Thanks for sharing.

lol!

thats right. no one is allowed to whump danny except for sg-1 and fanfic authors.

Love, love, love this! I laughed so much. Really captured Daniel and Jack's personalities.

That was funny! (What else can I say? Most of your storys are funny.) But it was good. :)