This is really very good! I love the feeling in it, and how Joe wants to give in, but doesn't. And I'm glad Joe said to forget about the sobpena. And how they both said "I love you..." Too awesome! Loved this! Wonderful job! :)

Wow, this must be one of my favorite stories ever. There's so much emotion underneath it all. Just brilliant. And when they both whisper "I love you" at the end - absolutely love that!