Update it

You know what I would love to see? Danny's ghost and maybe allies) make appearances. Skulker and Aragon would make for nasty "boss battles".
It's a pretty nice fic, and I like the fact that Phantom and his guild prefer staying back to help those who need rather than charging head on. Although you're following SAO's story a bit too much (them getting married, Dani as their daughter. It sounds too familiar). But what is done is done and it can't be changed. A suggestion would be to refrain from changing point of view so often. It is in my opinion that doing this break the flow of the story. If you really want to explore each character's view, maybe doing longer segments will benefit your work. If this happens once per chapter (with each character getting one as a cycle of sort) it would be better. What I'd avoid, however, is passing from 1st person to 3rd and back. There is no rule physically stopping you, but it would be a more correct way to write.
But these are only my opinions and advices, and you are entitled to write what you want. Practice makes perfect, after all.

It has been 7 months update already!

I don't understand the fixation in SAO crossovers where the only people who get the game outside Japan are beta testers, or won a contest. Seriously, EVERYONE does it, and it makes no sense at all. The amount of set up that would need to be put into allowing them to play would lose the company money. So... why not have more people from around the world and just up the numbers?

This in great so far! I can't wait to see what happens next in Danny's SAO adventure!

This story is awesome please update please

Definitely an interesting story good job!

Dani. Definitely Dani. Danny will do anything to get her back. ANYTHING. Also, ive noticed that your paragraphs look more like blocks of text. Might I suggest that you try to break your paragraphs down some? I mean, I love the story. I really do. Its a crossover of 2 of my most fav things. I adore SAO and DP. But I find that im slowly losing interest because of how the chapter is set up. And as a grammar nazi, though a silent one, things like blocks of text make me lose interest fast. And I really, really, REALLY dont want to stop reading this.

I am happily surprised by this story, I had thought it originally to be an odd combo. However I am very much enjoying your writing style, thank you for posting )

Please please preatty please continues this history is so incredible I love absolutely everything about this story, Sam and Danny are married Dani is in the game and is the daughter of Sam and Danny, and Danny is dead but has revived, that was a big plot twist, really want to see happens in the next two years, as the family relationship of dani grows, and as we all grow together, please keep writing have a unique talent for writing most writers continued writing I beg knees.

Ps the muse of writing touch to your window.

Awesome!

With all due respect, please separate story and character talking, it make it easier for readers to read and do not confuse our eyes and minds'
My mind tells me that your story is good, but my eyes say "This is fucking confusing"
And a paragraph should only has the maximum amount of lines between 5 to 7, if longer than eyes start to get confused

I loved loved LOVED this chapter. Maybe because of the Danny-Dani father-daughter element. I was NOT expecting that. But I LOVE IT! Once again, I can't wait for the next chapter! Squeee!

Oooo, I love this. This has got to be one of the best stories for this crossover. Easily. I can't wait for more!

I hope he can still turn into Danny Phantom by some glitch in the game.