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Nice! Keep writing, I will wait.

The end of this chapter both killed me and warmed my heart. Great installment, well amazing story all around. I'm interested where you plan to take their relationship and the issue with the living husks. Hope to see an update soon, but I understand life happens. So thank you for the awesome story you have written so far. :)

wow, I really like this story. Great job! Your story is very realistic and I love your Shepard. As a mother myself I can relate to shepard's overprotective behavior with David. Please update soon.

Love this story just as much as the first, keep up the good work. I don't know but every time Mov speaks, I hear Christoph Waltz.

Please have Femshep tell the story with joker how he joker overcomes his disability and became a pilot and have David be there for the story keep eating solid foods I wish Femshep would stop being so overprotective over David please have Femshep and David meet Garrus and his family on palaven soon awesome chapter next chapter ASAP

Ooh! Civil strife on Tuchanka already? I can't wait to see Wrex again!

This the best chapter I've ever read in this story Femshep has finally realized how much she is isolated from the galaxy I want more character development from Femshep and David I hope Femshep visits Garrus on palaven with David next chapter ASAP

Yay! Thanx for the update! Love this sooo much!

Aw cliff hanger! I like how Shepard is slowly gathering a team again. I also like the realistic and heartfelt conversation between her and Garrus. Great chapter

Hey! So good to see the crew coming back! Jack looks so cute caring for David like that! Lol
I just think there should have more of Garrus in it. I miss the big guy...
Keep it up :)

It is Zaeed! Glad to see them in action!

Yay new chapter! I'm glad to see Jack and I'm hoping the Captain is Zaeed.

If Garrus doesn't meet his son and femshep soon he will lose his family to James Vega I want femshep to stop being overprotective over David it is so not Shepard she has feed David solid foods soon she has to be braver for David she has to stop hovering over her son I feel bad for David because I want him go to Palavan to meet Garrus with femshep also want him to play sports and explore more of the universe and have fun I am so tired and a little bit mad at femshep for being overprotective of David I hope James Vega can help her get rid of her overprotectiveness I hope femshep can get more money for the Normandy I like this chapter i hope for more chapters like this where she is starting to let go of her overprotectiveness of David I hope there is a chapter where David is tired of qurian paste and eats more solid foods I also hope that he looks at other children and realizes that there having normal things next chapter ASAP

Oh god! Please let Garrus decide to finally drop bye only to realize Vega has stolen his family! Even though nothing happened that scene was hot! *fans self* and please let Vega talk some sense into Shep about her overprotectiveness