Reviews for Ronaldo
TheOperaticSquirrel chapter 37 . 4/20
Also (just because you said you like theories/ ideas) maybe a sequel (or even just a follow up) could start in a mundane/slice-of-life style, showing Shawn and his new norm. Waking up too early, staring at the ceiling for an hour as he tries and fails to fall back asleep, showers, brushes teeth, shaves, applies foundation, checks phone and dismisses the missed call from Cheif Vick. Not trying to be presumptuous, just throwing out an idea. Again, I love this story.
TheOperaticSquirrel chapter 38 . 4/20
This was one of the best stories I've ever read. I haven't been able to put it down for days. You managed the perfect pace to stimulate the imagination. Every chapter my mind was racing and I had to pause periodically to go over everything I knew and what the implications may be. The way you described Shawn's experience was so eerie, it gave me chills. The transition from knowing his name to not was creepy and unnatural, yet so smooth and brilliantly done. Despite working with such fantastical elements, it was always believable (if that makes sense).

This is a brilliant stand alone piece, but if you do decide to go ahead with a sequel, I'm sure it'll be great. It would be interesting to see how Shawn tries to put his life back together, how actually being psychic impacts Psych. Maybe he starts up slower, or only jumps in when a case comes up that the police really need help with, like something high profile with almost no evidence and investigation reveals the stakes are even higher than they imagined. I can so clearly picture Shawn opening up a bit to Lassie, telling him he had been right about him being a fraud, and that things were easier when he was lying. Maybe Thornton's wife reaches out to Shawn at some point, telling him something she dreamt centuries before. You've opened up a world of possibilities within this story, and it's fun to think about.
TheOriginOfLove chapter 38 . 4/9
Thank you for writing such an amazing story
TheOriginOfLove chapter 1 . 4/9
I kind of stopped reading this when I lost the password to my account, but I think about it at least once a month. I was watching the Pysch marathon with my family, and I couldn't stop thinking about it. It took me forever to find this again, but I can't wait to finally finish this
Rock Mint Swirl chapter 38 . 7/11/2018
HERE IS THE FANART! /dcgyago ~ Mintstar
AllieDotes chapter 38 . 7/3/2018
Thank you! Thank you so much for finishing this, I love this story so much. I started it when it was 18 chapters I think, and of course read it straight through without stopping. It had my attention from the beginning, and I waited patiently for the rest, checking every few weeks for an update.
I'm also hoping for a sequel... :D
Definitely one of the best stories out there, of any fandom. Thanks again.
silverliningineachcloud chapter 37 . 6/23/2018
OH MY GOODNESS
First of all, I am so sorry that it has taken me so long to review! I was traveling, then working, and in general being my forgetful self.
Here's what I have to say - I LOVE THIS FIC. You are an AMAZING writer, possibly one of the best I've ever read on the FF site. You truly have a talent and I hope you are writing a book or something because dang. It's so good. The details, the dialogue, the descriptions, the plot... A
And thank you so much for the Shules, I live for it, and you've written it beautifully as you have with everything else.
Thank you for the time and effort you have given to this work of art (because that's what it is!) I truly have enjoyed it and can see the immense amount of time and effort you have put into it. If you end up writing a sequel, you know I'm there for that 100% but take your time and recover and rejuvenate! Maybe I'll drop by with some ideas sometime, but until then, thank you again for your time, effort, and sharing your talent!
~silverlining
BreathingMagic chapter 38 . 6/21/2018
Wow. What a well crafted, wonderful story. I just spent the better part of two days reading this - this includes getting to bed at 2 am, knowing I will have to get up at 7 and still reading your fic until 5 in the morning because I COULDN'T STOP! You had the perfect measure of introducing OCs and giving us the time to fall in love with them while still keeping the focus on Shawn instead of forcing them on us - a task that not many usually achieve in fanfiction. And the sole name thing was so much more interesting and frustrating than you normal full blown amnesia.

I could go on and on but suffice to say that I adored this and that I am in awe of how you crafted this story, the pacing for me was just perfect. I was somehow hoping that maybe Seb/James could take the tattoo of Shawn's forehead (healing his skin so to speak) because he sure as hell has enough of a 'souvenir' from this whole endeavour anyway. Oh and I so love how you mangaged to keep each and every character true to themselves (honestly there well all so on point!) despite having sth supernatural there that they don't normally interact with!

So, if the muses ever kisses you again in regards to this story, I would be more than delighted to read a sequel to this. Until then, chapeau for what you've done and my eternal thanks for sharing it with us.
EWBAITE chapter 38 . 6/7/2018
Bravo! Thank you so much for this gift of a story and for bringing it to a satisfying conclusion!
Guest chapter 38 . 6/5/2018
I can't believe this is over. but wow, what a ride. you pulled it off excellently and I would read the fuck out of a sequel
MandaScooby chapter 38 . 6/4/2018
Aww. That was a great ending. Thanks for taking us along on this ride. You are a very talented writer.
Rock Mint Swirl chapter 38 . 6/4/2018
This story was tied up with a nice little bow :) ~ Mintstar
DwaejiTokki chapter 38 . 6/4/2018
Omg I can't believe it's over! I demand a sequel.

Thanks so much for writing!
magicwand452 chapter 38 . 6/3/2018
Amazing. Absolutely amazing. Thank you so much for writing this. I'm glad I stuck with this story until the end.
Rock Mint Swirl chapter 37 . 6/2/2018
Oooh my gosh! I can't believe it's almost over! I only started reading this, a few weeks to a month ago, but man I feel like the story flew by my face!

Anyways, great chapter and I look forward to the epilogue! I think a sequel would be great! (I will hopefully have the fan art soon! 8D ) ~ Mintstar
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