| Reviews for Double Agent Vader |
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BaddieDZ2 chapter 1 . 5/31 You've got 97 stories, I guess it's no wonder you couldn't finish this one. Or actually write a story in it. |
BaddieDZ2 chapter 21 . 5/30 And then the story was abandoned |
Lennex MacDuff chapter 21 . 5/3 You have a very poetic style of writing that I find very enjoyable. Your blend of folk tale and 'reality' is very impressive. I hope to see this updated sometime! |
QueenieGirl276 chapter 11 . 4/23 I have to say I love this story and that one day I would love to see more. The characters and culture in this story are incredible. I was rereading this story as it's one of my favorites and I kept wondering how Ahsoka would feel and react to the truth. I feel like there is a lot that could be explored there and I would love to see that if you ever get a chance. Thanks again for writing this amazing story I love it. |
Guest chapter 13 . 3/7 This story could have been written far better. The primary issue is that you don’t have an ounce of pacing cause you keep going backwards then forwards and then back again. Constantly jumping from childhood to adult hood then taking an entire chapter just to tell a story that you already told. There isn’t a plot and nothing is mapped out. Rather than talking about how Vader is tricking them you should talk about what Vader is doing and Luke and Leias training maybe involve ahsoke more. You need a plot not what feels like a collection of one shots. |
Luna Bass chapter 21 . 3/6 Pls update... I fell in love with this verse... |
Luna Bass chapter 19 . 3/6 Gosh, this makes me wish that she could learn, somehow, that her Uncle Ani is alive and still fighting. |
damianjeurissen chapter 12 . 2/25 This is the best chapter i have ever read. |
damianjeurissen chapter 14 . 2/25 This is the best chapter i have ever read. |
Germzy chapter 21 . 2/23 This is an amazing story |
JennySmith-TARDIS chapter 21 . 2/21 This is one of my favorite fan fictions and I am so glad that I found it again. You have written this story very well, with wonderful connections and side stories. I hope that one day, you will be able to update this again. |
NullifySky chapter 21 . 1/28 I just binged this, and it was fantastic. I am sad that it seems to be abandoned/finished. But I just wanted you to know that I loved this. Thanks! |
EllanaSkywalker chapter 21 . 1/20 This story is great! Probably my favorite from the Star Wars fandom! The idea is super original, each character is fascinating (I love Kadee) and the Amataka is incredible! It looks like a real culture because it is so realistic! I love. I hope there will be a sequel. |
AraelDranoth chapter 1 . 1/16 Very cool idea. |
torvalds42 chapter 21 . 1/14 Thanks for one of the best SW story out here, I especially love the mythology you describe, and how it resonates with the characters! |