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   Feldoran chapter 12 . 3/22 Just found this, and though it’s been a while since it updated I have to say this was quite enjoyable! Celestia makes for a fantastic teacher and the story left the railroad most others get stuck on long ago. Keep up the great work and I can’t wait to see more from you. |
| TheEverlastingHater chapter 12 . 1/11 Lots of spelling and grammar errors, but the underlying story is entertaining enough if you can ignore those. |
| RHJunior chapter 1 . 10/20/2019 Needs a proofreader.. .spelling and grammar errors here and there. |
| xyzdreadnought chapter 12 . 4/21/2019 this is a wonderful collection of quality horse words, that I was not expecting on this website. you'd probably get featured of you posted this on Fimfiction. I do hope you intend to continue, this is great, with lots of good ideas and great characterisation. |
| Siatru chapter 12 . 11/28/2018 Seeing Louise actually get a proper handle on her magic warms my heart. Plz update, author. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2018 AUTHOR! PLEASE GRANT US MORE OF THIS STORY! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST MY LITTLE PONY FANFICS I HAVE EVER SEEN! Also, Celestia is my favorite pony BUT PLEASE DO NOT ABANDON THIS STORY! IT'S MY BREAD AND BUTTER! |
| Gizmo Gear chapter 1 . 10/9/2018 They WERE trying to get rid of her! Naughty, naughty... |
| Ash0011 chapter 12 . 9/15/2018 BWAHAHAHA that has got to be the best reason for updating I've heard good story though, glad you remembered |
| osterreicher97 chapter 12 . 7/25/2018 I am always interested in the Familiar of Zero fandom, and the way that things are explained regarding the setting or Louise herself when or if it wasn't in the canon story. If I had to hazard a guess, Wardes probably did the geass because he is enough of a mad asshole to do it. He was aware that she was a void mage for awhile considering who he worked for secretly, and he would have enough interest seeing as him marrying her would be a plus on top of weakening Tristain. The geass could even be some mystical bs regarding Brimir's descendants, but it could only be proven if we get a look at the other heirs to see if they have it as well. It could also simply be someone else with a bone to pick with the Valliere. The last possible explanation would be someone else, maybe Cardinal Mazarin or whoever besides Wardes at the palace considering Louise spent time there before learning magic at the Valliere Estate. Will there be any conspiracies regarding Cattleya's illness? I remember reading a fic where the author explained it away as being part of an attempted poisoning or something because of the fact that Cattleya had early on showed great potential for being as powerful as her older sister and mother. If the author explores this in another way, it would certainly add to this story, and it would make Celestia's eventual visit to the Valliere more interesting. |
| guest chapter 12 . 7/6/2018 Celestia is actually a little over 3000 years old. |
| Mizuuma chapter 12 . 7/4/2018 Any chapter is better than no chapter! Don't worry, I know real life can get in the way of writing. I only JUST finished the Welcome to Night Vale oneshot fic I started years ago . Comments on the chapter: Oooh~the conspiracy! I'm gonna place my bets on Wards (is that how you spellhis name?) Being the respinsible party. He knew Lousie as a child after all. |
| James Birdsong chapter 12 . 7/4/2018 Awesome |
| Mythfan chapter 12 . 7/4/2018 Excellent work. |
| Major Simi chapter 12 . 7/3/2018 nice chapter |
| Eldrazi Cat chapter 12 . 7/3/2018 …? Hmm? Why has my nap been interrupted? … Send The Eye. I must observe this new addition to The Story! |
