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chaosshadow19 chapter 4 . 8/21/2019 Congrats just like I said. You are a spineless coward who always throws a temper tantrum when you don't get your way. *"But do everyone a favour, delete your account, and get out of fandom. I don't know or care what I did to offend you so much, because I have no clue who you are and I've never seen your face and you sure as hell haven't seen mine. I wanted to avoid petty back-and-forth with someone who is clearly less mature than a 10 year old but then you had to go under different guest names to write even more comments that prove how little your opinion is worth. You my friend, are not an anime fan, you are just an egotistical bully with nothing better to do than than lash out like spoiled child when you are met with an opinion you dislike. I may be snarky but not offensive or insulting and have not said or done anything to warrant this childish tantrum you have thrown. If you have a problem with differing opinions then you have no place in any kind of discussion, because guess what? Discussions involve differing opinions! Shocking I know. And wait, not only do discussions involve differing opinions, they also involve - wait for it - TOLERANCE and - you'll never believe it - UNDERSTANDING. Yes, I know. These must be new and shocking concepts to you. The idea that differing opinions can exist in harmony with one another. Hell as someone who followed Fairy Tail from beginning to end, through the good an bad, I can tell that you did not learn anything meaningful from it. A tale about cooperation and acceptance regardless of where you came from or what you did before. You have not displayed any of the beautiful lessons and character that Fairy Tail encourage. If anything, your "defense" of you rbeloved series has insulted it far, FAR more than anything I have said in my comments. Your behaviour has brought nothing but shame to the anime community. If you feel I offended by anything I have said here . . . fine. I am not trying to be your friend. I am not trying to apologize. Tell your opinion to your anyone who cares. They do not matter to me. I for one, have no plans of getting out of fandom or giving up on writing. So, you have accomplished nothing. Which is to be expected given that all you can do is type angry words while sitting in front of computer hiding in your hole. Congratulations. I hope you are proud of yourself. No one else is."* Like I said you have no redeeming factors. You are just a delusional idiot too full of your own shit. To know how stupid you sound. Your parents regret ever giving birth to you. And no one could blame them You are just worthless piece of shit who should never been born. You have done nothing of value your entire life. Go jump off a cliff asshole. Cause no one is going to miss you when you are dead. That's a fact. |
chaosshadow19 chapter 1 . 8/18/2019 Fairy Tail / One Piece fight comparison Natsu vs Laxus / Luffy vs Crocodile Laxus fought several people and used Fairy Law. Literally exhausting all his magic power. Natsu won fair and square. Whereas Luffy wins through the power of asspull. Crocodile completely dominates Luffy then suddenly out of nowhere Luffy wins through an asspull. Natsu vs Zero / Luffy vs Lucci Natsu had already used Dragon Force once and Jellal was a reknown wizard saint capable of mastering the 4 elements to the point of singlehandedly casting Abyss Break. Natsu barely overpowers Zero after hard fought victory. It stayed consistent. Lucci beats Luffy easily several times. Usopp yells friendship to Luffy. Luffy receives Power of Friendship and takes down Lucci in one attack. Ezra vs Azuma / Zoro vs Daz Bones The Tenrou Tree was previously stated to protect FT members and enchant their magic. Azuma states he left Erza's magic alone. The Tenrou Tree gives Erza magic like it was stated to. Daz Bones completely dominates Zoro in a fight. Zoro spouts some bullshit speech and then out of nowhere suddenly one shots Daz Bones. Erza vs Kyoka / Natsu vs Hades / Luffy vs Oars / Zoro vs Kaku Erza can sense magic power. As shown when she sensed Hades's power and Mard Geer's power before they attacked. Kyoka stood still. It stayed mostly consistent. Natsu lightning flame mode had already been hinted at. Natsu has already eat lightning once. So his transformation was hinted at and justified. Unlike Luffy and Zoro. Natsu doesn't win because of his transformation. Hades shrugs it off and describes Natsu's new power as an entertaining warm up. Ultimately its the exceeds destroying Devil's Heart that defeats Hades not the main character. Meanwhile Oars goes down like a bitch to Luffy's asspull transformation Referenced in FT Chapter 106 Oars completely dominates the Straw Hat Pirates with Luffy severely wounded. Luffy pulls a transformation out of his ass and turns into Nightmare Luffy and stomps Oars. Kaku completely dominates Zoro. Zoro gets upset cause of Robin. Zoro receives nakama power and pulls a transformation out of his ass and suddenly one shots Kaku. Dragon Slayers vs Dorma Anim / Natsu vs Future Rogue / Luffy vs Doflamingo / Luffy vs Katakuri Dragon Slayers work together in perfect unison and pull off a unison raid a pre established ability to beat the bad guy. They eat their elements when their magic is running low. Natsu eats flames from the missiles, Gajeel eats the metal dragon, Wendy can eat the air Natsu eats Atlas's flames for a power boost as Atlas Flame himself explains. With his new power from the hellflames he defeats Future Rogue. Doflamingo completely dominates Luffy in every way. Luffy pulls 4th Gear out of his ass and defeats Doflamingo. He somehow escapes Doflamingo's strings despite none of Whitebeard's Commanders being able to. Round 1 - Katakuri easily beats Luffy. Round 2 Luffy pulls Snake Man Transformation out of his ass and beats Katakuri. Despite the fact. Katakuri is at full strength while Luffy is exhausted after fighting several enemies but Luffy's plot armor prevails. Erza vs Minerva / Zoro vs Kuma Erza previously got second origin from Ultear. An established power. Erza uses her second origin against Minerva. It stayed consistent. Zoro who previously could barely move from one stab wound. He fights Kuma while heavily wounded and barely standing after being defeated by Oars. Kuma transfers all of Luffy's pain and injuries to Zoro. Zoro somehow survives cause of plot armor. Fairy Tail is consistent. One Piece is not. Win/Loss Record Natsu losses: Aria, Fukuro, Cobra, Ultear, Bluenote, Acnologia, Torafuzer, Madmorl. Erza losses: Jose Porla, Jellal, Cobra, Acnologia, Eclipse Dragons, Irene, Kyria Erza has won on her merits. As for Luffy and Zoro Luffy Losses: Kuma. Zoro Losses: Kuma They literally have about one or two losses each. Cause the few losses those two have. Luffy and Zoro just pull out one asspull after another to win If Natsu actually won by yelling friendship as optards and other trolls keep claiming. He would not lose half of his battles. Zero would have lost the second Natsu went into dragon force. Hades wouldn't have immediately gotten up from Natsu's strongest attack with nary a scratch. Mard Geer would have instantly lost to Natsu when Dragon Force happened. On the other hand, Luffy practically never loses. Just mention the word friendship and Luffy instantly wins. Lucci completely dominated the fight. Usopp says friendship. Luffy instantly wins with one attack. Oars dominated the battle. Friendship is mentioned. Luffy gains new transformation out of nowhere that goes against every established rule in One Piece. Luffy instantly beats Oars with nakama power. No consequences. Luffy vs Doflamingo. Friendship is mentioned. 4th Gear Asspull stomps Doflamingo. Luffy vs Katakuri. Friendship is mentioned. Luffy instantly wins with new asspull transformation. And so on & so on. |
chaosshadow19 chapter 15 . 8/18/2019 Mary Sue: Shirou Emiya the Mary sue Character Development: Nonexistent. Similar to Luffy, Shirou is a completely one dimensional character All you really need to know about him is that he wants to be a hero and protect others. That's basically his entire character. He comes from the series Fate Stay Night, the sequel to Fate Zero and boy was Fate Stay Night a disappointment. Inherently there is nothing wrong with having your character being a hero but that is only if it is done right. Power Ups: Can beat any enemy through the power of love and friendship. No seriously. There is no justification for the power of bullshit this guy gets. He beats freaking Gilgamesh through the power of bullshit. Let take these three much better characters for instance. Kiritsugu Emiya Character Development: "I was reckless when I was young. I educated myself by cursing the heartlessness of the world. The world was cruel – so I made myself more heartless and used that as a weapon, trying to follow through on my ideals." – Kiritsugu Emiya One of my favorite character. He is man who is jaded by his experiences. He originally wanted to be hero, a trait passed onto his son Shirou. But he was soon learned how horrible reality was as he saw his home, family and crush destroyed. He transforms from a happy go lucky child to burnt cinnamon bun who is a deadly assassin. "They call certain methods of fighting good and others evil, acting as if there were some nobility to the battlefield. Such illusions, perpetrated by heroes throughout history, have led countless young men to their bloody deaths, all for the sake of this valor and glory." – Kiritsugu Emiya He is willing to use any underhanded means to win. However he does still show signs of humanity. For example several times over he shows he is willing to give up the war and take Irisviel back home to their daughter so he doesn't risk losing his family. This is someone who is constantly scared and terrified behind a mask of calmness to hide his fears. "Our Heroic Spirit here thinks the battlefield is something better than hell. What a joke. It's hell itself. There's no hope on the battlefield. It has nothing but unspeakable despair. Just a crime we call victory, paid for by the pain of the defeated. Yet humanity has never recognised this truth. And the reason for that is, in every era a dazzling hero has blinded people with their legends and prevented them from seeing the evil of bloodshed. The true nature of humanity has not advanced a step beyond the stone age." He has gone through a life of misery and despair. The same dark experience that made him who he was today. He is an incredible sympathetic character. He has seen the cruel reality of life and that has destroyed his innocent view of the world. He has become cynical and close minded in his views. That's what so great about Fate Zero. More than anything, It was a battle between ideals and different goals. You saw all these different character motivations and life stories that changed these amazing characters into who they are today. The philosophical debates between their points of view were just amazing and awe inspiring. Fate Stay Night can be summed up as the boy who got his own harem and beat the bad guy. That's it. That's literally the entire story. You are literally deluding yourself if you think there is anything deep about Fate Stay Night. I've watched it multiple times both anime and visual novel. It is an overglorified cheap harem anime. Kirito Character Development: After escaping Sword Art Online for the first time. Kirito is permanently scarred for life. This shows even in later series. He is constantly having nightmares about the ordeal, has survivor's guilt after seeing all the people who died and even gives up duel wielding except in emergencies. Shirou on other hand comes out of Holy Grail completely unscathed, same for Rin and the others. After what is described as survival of the fittest. His view on the world is completely the same, his personality is exactly the same, pretty much no one dies, no sacrifices were made, no development was made. Shirou remains the same one dimensional character he was before. Izuku Midoriya Character Development: Deku similar to Shirou, is someone who wanted to be a hero his entire life. A big difference however is how their mentor/older versions impacts their lives. To start off the Archer & Shirou relationship. Pointless. Archer is a servant in Fate Stay Night. But the whole future Shirou Emiya thing was completely pointless. Shirou does not change one bit from this and still defeats Archer anyway. Archer could have been literally anyone and the story would not have changed one single bit. Heck just make Archer a normal hero who comes from Russia with the power of tracing and the story would not have changed at all. Now then Deku & All Might. Deku idolises All might. Practically worships the ground he walks. Similar to Shirou. Deku is self destructive and reckless. His powers literally destroy his body from the inside out. But unlike Shirou, the biggest difference between them. Deku actually has *Character Development*. Obviously Deku can't just keep up his self-sacrificial tendencies. So after seeing how much this affects his mother and the people he cares about. He learns how selfish and reckless he was being. Only thinking of himself and his own goals. He learns to be less reckless and take better care of himself. He adapts his fighting style so there is less pressure on his arms and begins to focus on a more leg-based fighting style with help from Tenya Iida. For the sake of explaining common sense to the idiots babyraging in the review section UBW vs Gate of Babylon Gilgamesh stomps. Gilgamesh even when not serious was trolling Saber by casually defending against her attacks in Fate Stay Night. He also restricted Berserker easily with Enkidu. Several Fate Fans in forums have also called Shirou & Sieg mary sues. Because Shirou himself admits that any servant could take on UBW and win. But he apparently thinks he can beat Gilgamesh because sword spam sword spam. If that was true most anime characters would easily beat Gilgamesh. But as Fate fans love to bring up Gilgamesh has several ships, armour , shields, haxed weapons that could easily defeat his opponents e.g. moving at the speed of light or thought. You can't have it both ways. Heaven's Feel Shirou sacrifices nothing. He doesn't give up his dream. Best case for Shirou, He simply chooses not to take the easy way out. That's it. He doesn't deserve an award just for that. At the end of the day, its still the same as any other route, He fights Kirei, or the other repetitive bad guy, saves the day and goes back to live with his family and friends. Illya dies, that's not exactly new after saving Shirou through a Deus ex machina. He is still fighting Angra Mainyu to save the world, he is still fighting Sakura to save the world. Besides Shirou acting Emo over nothing. Nothing changes. Depth of other routes Non existent. Fate Stay Night, defeat and save tsundere little sister, defeat the evil priest UBW, Fight Kuzuki, Saber gets kidnapped, Archer turns traitor, Gilgamesh kills Illya, Shirou beats Archer and this whole scene was pointless. Since Shirou doesn't change or do anything about his flaws, Shirou beats Gilgamesh through power of friendship, day is saved again. Your babyraging simply proves my point that all Fate fans are clearly braindead idiots who throw a tantrum at anyone who disagrees with them yet you idiots have the nerve to bash other series and act like assholes. |
lennymosca4 chapter 1 . 10/20/2018 naruto next generation is fanfiction this is what really happened at the name of those last movie the true ending not the fanfiction one Hinata watched as Naruto left her father's study, and began his trek back to the front gates. She followed the blond boy, making sure to always stay in the shadows so he would not see her. The moment Hinata had seen Naruto here; she had realized this was her chance to confess her feelings for the blond. She knew that she may not ever get a chance to do so like now, since he was right here in her house. However she was still having trouble gathering her courage to go up and talk to the boy. The decision was soon taken from her as Naruto called out, "you can come out now Hinata." Hinata's eyes widened in shock, how had he seen her? This had never happened in all the years she had followed him, something like this was not only unprecedented, but also unexpected. Whatever the case he had found her, so she had no choice but to come out and confront the blond. "H-Hello N-Naruto-k-k-kun," Hinata said, cursing herself for being so shy. She knew she would never get another chance like this, so she had to take it. She took several deep breaths as she tried to calm her raging nerves, which felt like they were overloading her brain right now. Hinata opened her mouth as she looked at him, only to start swaying on her feet for a little bit. I… will… not… faint… Hinata thought to herself as she tried to steady her nerves. Finally she opened her mouth, "iloveyou!" The words had been spoken so fast, that had Naruto, not had enhanced senses he was sure he would have missed it. Naruto repressed the sigh that threatened to escape him, while he commended the girl for gathering the courage to tell him that, he had really hoped she wouldn't. perhaps it was naive thinking, but Naruto had been hoping that the girl's shy nature would keep her from confessing; at least until he had something to say that would let her down easy. Still now might be the best time to nip her feelings in the bud, after all he did not wish to lead her on with the false hope that they might get together. "Hinata you are a very kind, beautiful and compassionate Kunoichi," Naruto said knowing that what he said next would break her heart. "However I don't have any romantic feelings for you, I'm sorry." "What?" Hinata asked as if she had not heard him, it took a few seconds for the words to register, but when they did tears started to form at the corner of her eyes. "You mean… you don't…" she couldn't believe it; she had worked so hard to tell him, only for him not to have the same feelings for her. "No," Naruto said in a soft voice, "I don't." "But… but…" Hinata's mouth was unable to work properly, not that it mattered anyway as she spun around and took off. Naruto sighed as he chased after her, knowing that if he did not reason with her, things would not end well. He doggedly followed the lavender eyed girl, who was dodging and weaving in an effort to lose him. However Naruto was far faster and more agile then she was, and soon caught up. He grabbed her arm to keep her from moving. "Let go of me!" Hinata shouted as she yanked on her arm. "Not until you listen to me," Naruto replied in a calm voice. "I don't want to hear it! Let go!" realizing she would not be able to get away like this, Hinata turned around and attempted to Jukken strike Naruto. Said blond was surprised that Hinata would go this far, but thanks to his enhanced reflexes was able to avoid the strike. He quickly wrapped Hinata in a bear hug, keeping her arms pinned to her sides so she could not use them. Though the girl continued to struggle and even tried to Jukken him with her feet, however she soon began to tire. Eventually the girl sagged into him as she started to cry, sighing Naruto just let her do so until she calmed down. "Why?" the girl asked, with her voice muffled by his Kimono, "why don't you love me? Why won't you love me?" "Because you don't love me," Naruto stated causing Hinata's head to snap up so fast, the blond thought it would break. "How could you say that!" Hinata asked, completely unaware that she had not stuttered. "I've always loved you! Ever since the academy! You gave me strength and courage! I-" "Only saw what you wanted to see," Naruto interrupted her, "you saw the side of me that was loud, obnoxious and was not afraid to scream about how he would be Hokage at the top of his lungs. You were so fixated on this image of me and felt that I was something to strive for, so you put me on a pedestal. As something you would always watch from afar, but never touch, which was why you were too afraid to talk to me." "That's not true at all!" Hinata shook her head, "I saw you as something I wanted to be! Something to strive for…" "Which is what you do when you place someone on a pedestal," Naruto interrupted in a soft voice. "Hinata what you saw was not me, not all of me anyway. You saw the parts of me that you wanted; because that side of me was everything you were not. You felt that if you could just be near me, then maybe you would gain some of my strength. Am I right?" Hinata gave a hesitant nod, since that was true. Ever since she had seen his loud and proud attitude, she had begun to admire the boy. She had taken to following him, because just watching the blond had given her strength to go on. He was what she felt she wanted to be, she wanted the courage he would show even when the world had tried to stomp on that courage. That never give up attitude, that's what she wanted to have for herself. "That's exactly what I mean, that's not real love. You wanted me to be your strength, your courage, to be able to lift you up when you could not do it yourself." Naruto shook his head, "what you have to understand is that by trying to use me for your strength, you end up weakening your own." Hinata's eyes widened as what Naruto said began to sink in, "what do you mean?" "Hinata I can give you no more strength then a soldier pill can give you chakra, yes you may gain a temporary boost by relying on me. But in the end it's only a passing feeling and can never give you the strength you are looking for. What would happen if you were on a mission that went bad, all of your comrades were incapacitated and you were the only one capable of protecting them and completing the mission. What would you do if I wasn't there to give you that pick me up? If you had to rely on your own strength to carry on, only you had been relying so much on me that your own strength failed." Hinata looked at Naruto with wide eyes as his words were tossed around in her head, it was painful to admit but she realized he was right. All this time she had been trying to rely on Naruto instead of herself, even when he was gone her thoughts were on the blond. It was like he had become some drug or a crutch as he said. Because truthfully all she had been trying to do was emulate the blond in front of her. It was enough to make her feel sick, "I really am weak," Hinata muttered as tears formed in her eyes again. "You are not weak Hinata," Naruto said in a firm voice, as he placed his hands on the girl's shoulders. Hinata looked up at Naruto as he spoke, "you just have yet to come into your own strength, but it's there. However you need to find the right reasons to gain that strength, which are not to impress a boy." "What are your reasons?" Hinata asked, hoping that if she knew the reasons of someone else, she could try to find out her own. "At first my reason was simply because I wanted to be acknowledged, it was stupid but that was why I tried so hard." Naruto's eyes began to glaze over and his voice softened as he continued, "however as time went on and I gained people who did acknowledge me, my reasons changed." Naruto looked at Hinata, "now I fight and gain strength so that I can protect the people who are most important to me. The people who I have found a family in, the Konoha eleven, the people I met in my travels… it's for them I try to get stronger, so that I can protect them." Hinata was silent for a moment as she thought about her reasons, really thought about them. Now that she was thinking a little more clearly, she realized that what she had been doing was no better than when Sakura and Ino had tried to gain Sasuke's affection. Everything she had done was for Naruto, but now that Naruto made her realize this she did not really have a reason… or did she? "I… I think I want to gain strength to protect my family, and make them proud of me." Hinata said as she looked at Naruto, "I don't want them to think of me as weak, or a burden anymore." Naruto gave the girl a smile, "that's a good reason, wanting to help your family is one of the best reasons anyone can have. I know that with that desire in mind, you will gain strength." Naruto stuck his hand out to the girl, "friends?" Hinata looked at the hand and then back to Naruto before smiling, "Friends," she said as she took the hand. |
rawdah03 chapter 1 . 8/20/2017 Did you stop writing or not this sfory is just amazing. |
CRASH ZONE chapter 15 . 8/6/2017 I am amazed with this story, it is just amazing plain and simple PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE! |
rawdah03 chapter 15 . 7/20/2017 Continue pls,iťs great |
fuck chapter 1 . 4/15/2017 this is bullshit |
arinasution5 chapter 7 . 2/27/2016 Next |
RipSpine chapter 15 . 2/16/2016 Maybe Sasuke can have Madara's eyes transplanted or Naruto can heal his eye or Sasuke can have his original eye transplanted since he's using Itachi's eyes |
woguy21 chapter 7 . 2/7/2016 Lol he says sasuke skills during the war were at least joinin level . I think what he mean he was at least god level |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/3/2016 Sorry but nobody besides a otsusuki can fight naruto or susuke and live |
Egirl Winter chapter 15 . 1/17/2016 Love the story! Keep it up! :) |
Good story chapter 15 . 1/12/2016 Pls update and Sasuke must get his rinnegan back pls! Update |
Great story chapter 15 . 1/12/2016 Update pls and please let Sasuke get his rinnegan back or it just won't be the story though looking forward to the end and u should do a sequel after |