more please

You're doing good I hope you do more see you in the next story young guardian .

This is great. I really enjoyed it. It has a unique storyline that very few people use.

Wow that ws awesome! the only bad thing is that it was too short and left me with the i want more taste in my mouth haha, but seriously i would like to see more this is a crossover that is almost nonexist and i don't know why but this story and animegirl 144 stories made me ship jack x weiss(second favorite girl to pair with jack now just losing to elsa haha) anyways thanks for this awesome work

This could become a great story!

Like the idea of them meeting. I honestly think their a good couple simply because their so opposite. One is all about perfection while the other just wants to have fun. Its a bonus the cold doesn't bother them.

Oops...I guess I should double check on the "author's" home page before I comment...sadly, this is not the first time I have made a wrong assumption.

Anyways, I am still interested if whoever wrote this is willing/finds inspiration to write more.

I understand that this story is posted as complete. However, if you ever have a desire to maybe do a sequel or another chapter on how Jack will get back, i would be quite interested in reading it.

I really like the mirror breaking effect and how you had the two worlds collide. Thank you for posting this, and I hope I don't sound forceful/pushy.

Cool! I dont know what RWBY is but i like this all the same :)

I'm sorry you were both expecting this to be a multi-chapter. I was only intending this to be a one shot from two perspectives. sorry :(

Seems interesting . About time we had another rotg and rwby crossover

This was well done. Jack appearing to Weiss just after his encounter with Pitch seems like a great place to put it since Jack would be in an emotional turmoil over Pitch's attacks (the mental and emotional ones).

I read the first part just recently and am so happy to see that to you are continuing the story! I love what you have done so far and can't wait for more! :D

This was beautiful. I wouldn't mind a sequel/second chapter to see it from Jack's point of view.

I would definitely love to see more of this, it is very interesting! :D