Dammit! So close. I hope Iris gets a hold on her powers and can get them to work for her, not control her.

Must say, H.A.R.D. landing intrigues me.

Very nice. It was totally different from what I had expected on reading the summary. Even the intro story didn't fully prepare me. And so many sweet brilliant scenes.

I love how you write FemHarry and Hermione. So lovable and cuddly. Just wanna pinch their cheeks and squeeze em.

And the Marvel characters were all terribly interesting in their roles as well. Ross is a moron, Clint seems fun, Son of Coul is snippy in all the right ways.

I can't wait to see things branch out further into the MCU and how that ominous prophecy will affect things.

Neville's line is 'why is it always me?' Surely Potter's line by now must be 'why always bloody prophecy?'

Loved both the confessions. But especially the magical girls. That was emotional.

Always bugged me he never went with the obvious solution. Surgery to remove the pieces and mount the reactor in the suit. Great story though.

The plot thickens... Good stuff for sure, I'm excited to see where you are going with the Asgard content.

I just wanted to say that I really like this story. I like the slowly developing romance between Iris and Hermione. There is an error I would like to point out though. In this chapter you point out Iris changing into her work clothes and being concealed in the night. That is where the issue comes up. At around 6:00 PM to 7:00 PM in late August it is still daylight. During the month of August, the sun doesn't set until just before 8:00 PM to just before 7:30 PM.

Other than that error, I enjoyed this chapter.

Not really feeling this one. It's not bad, just not really my taste I guess. Marvel and DC are OK but after worm, and a few darker fanfics in various super hero settings they just don't quite seem right.

Death's MistressIrisShe-Hound of Fate. HermioneBrave Eagle. Death's Suitorthe one planning invasion of Earth to gain Tesseract? Who is Death's Father? I hope for love, not anger, in HermioneIris path. Loki, don't be bound by your blood, be bound by your choices, if you have to be bound. LokiRaven, Iris is kindred spirit, Iris will be mentored by Loki, hooray! What will Loki's destiny be when Iris comes for him?

Raven, who are you? Loki, or not?..
Shacklebolt... I would recommend calming potion, or dreamless sleep. Or a good opponent to distract her away from populated areas, and battle it out to exhaustion.

Tony, it's not your fault you were attacked. Be glad that collateral damage is "only" a few drivers, and not the whole crowd of spectators.

Young raven? Odin, curse you...

I like it!
Iris having control issues is a good twist.
Frankly I think Harry should have gone DARK after learning the prophecy!
I would have KILLED TOM and ALBUS both!
Then started killing sheep, goats, rats, cats, canines...
All of the animals who make up the Wizarding World and pretend to be people.

This waiter must feel so exasperated on Iris's behalf, she just can't catch a break with her date XD

That raven is making my curiosity go crazy, can't wait to find out the relevance of it.