So Sakura is protesting that Kakashi gets injured 2 often a chapter or 2 back. But then punches him through a wall and with trajectory enough to frighten flocks of birds so im guessing 500 meters or so.

If this was an attempt to be funny, it's at the expense of making Sakura look like an aboslute moron.

Loved it!

Quite nice. It's not an epic tale of many adventures, but it's fine like this.

Every chapter is named after a tailed beast? Was the length planned in advance then?

This was a wonderful read, thank you!

Thanks! To read!

Not into NaruSaku at all, but make sense why the confusion even more is on that part.
also make sense because happy world mean together with Crush too.

if Kaguya make fake Sasuke maybe Naruto would trust the Fantasy world even more. even the readers...
because I already suspicious when Sasuke still not there at all until finally he show up to save Naruto...

that was such a sad Bittersweet ending... but still very good fic!

How the fuck did I miss reading this diamond of a story while it was being actively published will haunt me to the rest of my days, seriously, how could I miss this?! This is the shit!

This is phenomenal, in less than 20k words you made a much more meaningful, nuanced, satisfying,vrealistic, logical and hardhitting ending for the Kaguya fight and even the FSWW than Kishi did as far as I'm concerned, and considering that I'm one of the few who try to not give him too much shit for how it all went down in the last arc that's saying a lot.

The dinamic between Naruto and Kaguya was especially well developed and it helped to give them a much deeper (and in her case a very much needed) layer of characterization, and Sasuke wasn't too shabby himself for the little while he was there.

Regarding the ridiculous bullshit of the gender roles nonsense, just going to lay down this hardcore piece of truth said in Rick and Morty 2x08: 8 "Maybe people that create things aren’t concerned with your delicate sensibilities, y’know? Maybe the species that communicates with each other through the filter of your comfort are less evolved than the ones who just communicate. Maybe your problems are your own to deal with and maybe the public giving a shit about your feelings is a one-way ticket to extinction."

Cue the badass mic drop.

called it

sixteen, with both parents, sakura as his (probably, haven't read that far yet) girlfriend, and phantom memories of another completely diferent life? uf this ain't a Eternal Tsukiyomi world, I'll eat my phone.

I loved your portrayal of the life naruto would've had with his parents , it was really enjoyable and I thought this story was a really nice read !

I love it

This was simply enthralling. At first, I only read this so I could fall asleep easily, but then I was wrong. I am now wide awake and the ONLY one awake in the house. I love the way you write! Your grammar, your spelling (though there is that little typo about 'focussed' rather than 'focused' and there was another term that bothered me but I forgot about it), your vocabulary, and your subtle hints. I felt happy for Naruto, but at the same time I also felt paranoid and at the edge of my seat! Marvelous writing. I would love to read more of your works. I have a comment about the final fight scene, though... So, call me biased, but it just feels really weird (to me) reading about Naruto and Sasuke battling Kaguya instead of Team 7 Obito. Huh. Or maybe I'm just a stickler for canon. Lol. Anyway, I still love your twist here. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us! C:

This was simply enthralling. At first, I only read this so I could fall asleep easily, but then I was wrong. I am now wide awake and the ONLY one awake in the house. I love the way you write! Your grammar, your spelling (though there is that little typo about 'focussed' rather than 'focused' and there was another term that bothered me but I forgot about it), your vocabulary, and your subtle hints. I felt happy for Naruto, but at the same time I also felt paranoid and at the edge of my seat! Marvelous writing. I would love to read more of your works. I have a comment about the final fight scene, though... So, call me biased, but it just feels really weird (to me) reading about Naruto and Sasuke battling Kaguya instead of Team 7 Obito. Huh. Or maybe I'm just a stickler for canon. Lol. Anyway, I still love your twist here. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us! C:

Nice story.

Naruto didn't ignore Hinata's confession because he was a moron, he just missinterpreted it because he didn't have the same upbringing as a normal person.

Agree with your rant about reviewers complaining for gender roles, a woman doing the house chores under her own choice is not sexist.