Poor Viper lol I feel like this smuggling adventure is going to be fun

Lupa is back! Love this chapter. I totally understand Lupa's frustration, and the gods. Makes me wonder how the other Divines and Daedra feel about this new world that the dragons have shaped. I feel like some characters, daedric champions maybe, will join forces and bring another while new Dragon Wars.

P.S. love how in the beginning of the chapter there's a little info, like how loading screens are like. Nice touch there.

Go Viper! Woot woot! So in advance for the notification blow up but review I shall

Nurr seems like a really cool character.

A pureborn werewolf? Omg that's a great idea. I really wish Skyrim had something similar since there was pure blooded vampires.

Great background story for Viper. Already there's a big heist going on and I totally can't wait to read more.

Whoa. Can't believe I'm just now finding this story! Only on chapter 2 and I have to say, holy cow! This nis going to be one great story.

It got me curious when the one guy siad that the wolves are getting restless, does he mean the werewolves? If it's getting bad for them I wonder how the vampires are doing.

All of your characters are great. Love your writing style. I feel like I'm reading a fantasy novel.

I was trapped under a rock for two weeks and reread this whole thing from start to end.

Small thing, Malus was a dick even before he joined Alduin. Don't know how I didn't see it at first.

Bigger thing, I was such an idiot. The answers to questions I thought were left open were right there, all I had to do was read! I won't say what, in case some rascal is browsing the reviews for spoilers like I'd do - but bravo SF.

Update soon - I'm following your deviantart now!

My favorite is the mage, Pyrus. Partially because I'm partial to fire myself, I've always been fond of magic, and he himself is interesting to me.

Well... that was quite the twist...

Great chapter, as expected ;)

Well dam, I didn't think I'd like this but I gotta admit you got my attention.

It's such a shame that the Dragonborn's fate has not been fully explored. Everything else pales in comparison, it's Just mere contextual setting. But the Dragonborn, Mallus, now that would have been euphoric to read. Of a mind rendered, of greatest betrayal of humanity. Utterly fantastic it would been. Alas, potential wasted.

Nice job of keeping me interested on what the hell it was that Pyrus had found, and the reveal itself was rather... surprising.

The mad lad's found a dragon egg! And of course, he realizes it'll be a bit difficult (Read: Almost impossible) to make it loyal to himself.

Though, i'm sure he'll find a way with his persistence and ego.

Nice chapter, and fitting title.

Nice chapter, sad reminder of how bleak this world is.

A faint glimmer of hope shines through nonetheless.