this really needs another chapter

Get a beta, please. The grammar is so wanky I can't even read the first paragraph. Please mention you're using an OC too (it's off-putting to have an OC appear out of nowhere and without warning).

Grammar, spelling... I mean I couldn't read the second chapter because I couldn't understand when the dialogue started and who was talking... The idea was interesting but it ended up being muddled. Take care with the ideas for the next chapter, make it clearer of what happened with Satou because until now I couldn't understand why he had a contract with Usagi, and try to build better the reactions of the characters. I hope you don't get My suggestions in the wrong way.

u write so bootiful im crying

waaaaa ese usagi es un marvado! ¿como engañar a misaki?
QUE SE VALLA CON IJUUIN Y NO LO PERDONE!