Reviews for Floating In The Mind
Myra109 chapter 22 . 8/7/2018
I liked this idea. I'll admit, there were a few grammatical errors, but in my opinion, writing mistakes don't matter if the final product is good enough for people to overlook them, and this one was certainly fantastic enough for me to overlook any mistakes. If Disney ever makes a sequel to Inside Out, I'd want them to do something like this story. I loved this story so much. Great job!
oracleprincess 1 chapter 1 . 10/18/2017
In-sightful!
Cloclo chapter 17 . 2/14/2017
No offense, but you kinda made Riley seem extremely stupid when she jumped into the memory dump.
FictionFandom chapter 22 . 1/31/2017
That story is just plain AWESOME, like and inside out 2!
RATNMR7 chapter 22 . 1/2/2017
Nice job. I love Inside Out and I could see a second movie. The idea of Riley going inside of her own head is a very interesting idea. If i do have one complaint, it's that Bing Bong didn't do much and his explanation for being alive was kind of rushed. Don't get me wrong, I love Bing Bong as much as every one else, but his appearance could have been better, in my opinion.
But, I still enjoyed the story regardless.
lordhaxsupreme chapter 22 . 9/23/2016
Good writing skills! i enjoyed it a lot, even though it was sad at some points. You were right about how Bing Bong returned in chapter 13, certainly not the best, but still it was nice to add him in nevertheless. Thanks for the story!
Taqqiq786 chapter 16 . 4/23/2016
Probably blue
jon12231223 chapter 25 . 4/2/2016
You can still finish the story you know that right just read all the chapters you read before it the chapter where you lost your train of thought you can get it back you just need to read what you have now and think of how to continue it from there
imaguestD chapter 25 . 3/27/2016
You put the same channel link for Ashlynn Hughes and Stephanie Pham (its Stephanie's, Ashlynn's is missing)
jon12231223 chapter 24 . 3/19/2016
I think you can still write it I mean if you read all the chapters that came before this chapter that you might still be able to finish it from the ideas after reading it
thumb drive chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
i hope u find me soon
Guest chapter 4 . 11/10/2015
I'm a guest, but, so you can tell me apart, I'm calling myself Higgs
Book girl fan chapter 24 . 10/31/2015
That's terrible! I really hope you can either find your USB, or recover your inspiration for those stories.
Cinndon Sodagard chapter 24 . 10/29/2015
Look on the bright side, your rewrites could come out better then how you first had it. I wish you the best of luck!
Celestia's Paladin chapter 24 . 10/29/2015
I think I can speak for the rest of us and say we know how it feel. There's a reason I keep by thumb drive on my keys, goodness knows how many time I freaked out about missing it.
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