Reviews for Black as Night
Guest chapter 2 . 8/3
i dont if this is very old for you to react but i enjoy it
Good writeree
EchoTheHybrid chapter 7 . 7/7
Facetouching! Yay!
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jaffa3 chapter 26 . 9/19/2019
I just read this entire story in 2 hours and loved every single letter of it. Everything about it was great from start to finish.
Judge1964 chapter 8 . 7/11/2019
Twist: Hiccup can actually see, he just wanted to stop getting bullied.

Judge
Judge1964 chapter 6 . 7/10/2019
So we have the first ropes of a bond. More to come soon, I’m sure.

Judge
Judge1964 chapter 5 . 7/10/2019
So we have the first ropes of a bond. More to come soon, I’m sure.

Judge
Judge1964 chapter 4 . 7/9/2019
Seems like a hiccupy thing to do. Learn you’re blind, accept it and move on. Just like he does with his leg.

Judge
Judge1964 chapter 3 . 7/9/2019
This is the Astrid I like. Alive feeling ashamed, perhaps, but not robotic. I look forward to what comes next (even though I’ve read it before)!
Judge1964 chapter 2 . 7/8/2019
Gotta be honest, I dislike this Astrid. Not your fault, it’s how she is in the movie. Obsessed with dragon killing.

Now, the Astrid that burns her hands for Hiccup, that’s my favourite Astrid. Unfortunately, we have a long way to go...

Judge
Judge1964 chapter 1 . 7/8/2019
Hmm. What do we have here? An intriguing story about a blind Hiccup and a essentially robotic Astrid? Sounds interesting. Wouldn’t it be something if Astrid blinded him?

Nah, that’d never happen. I really enjoyed the sass of Hiccup in this chapter. And look forward to seeing more!

Judge
HephaestusBuilds chapter 3 . 6/4/2019
Holy freakin crud! What did i just stumble across? I was checking out a community where I saw a drabble for this story, thought it sounded interesting so I went to your profile and found it and man am I hooked by just this chapter alone. Can't wait to read the next one!

Have a good one,

Hephaestus
JasmineDragon22 chapter 26 . 4/27/2019
A great fic. I could’ve done with a few more changes from the original story line but overall I really liked it. The progression of Astrid and Hiccup’s relationship was beautiful to read.
L'assassin orange chapter 4 . 4/1/2019
I really don't like how dark Hiccup's thoughts are. That's really not a good sign when you just got a permanent disability, especially one's as radically life-changing as blindness.
Dancingheart4ever chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
I really appreciate the way you delved into Hiccup's thought process in that pivotal first scene with Toothless. So many stories rush over that moment. Thank for you taking your time there. The great thing about books is that they can show thoughts where movies can only show actions. I really believed Hiccup's decision not to kill Toothless and how counterintuitive that was for him.
Rennyangelee chapter 26 . 12/22/2018
Oh wow. As a blind reader, I find myself critiquing all the blind fics I read. Most of them just scream "blind fetish;" some are okay but full of unintentional cliches; but I have been able to find some gems. I think yours is definitely one of the best ones ever! Realistic, creative, deep...love it! Heading over to the oneshot collection "Blindspots" now.
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