Tht was fucking awesome!

Honestly, I was expecting Harry & co to be discover at some point, but the dual storylines work well, even without any interaction! Great work! This was such an interesting concept compared to all the stuff I’ve read! I’d advise you avoid using things like “omg” and “etc” though when writing! Still amazing either way, and your plot was amazing enough to keep me around even after those, so I’d say you did pretty good! Keep writing!

I love this story

For a bit there, I could really get into the story, it felt a bit random and all over the place. I also didn't really like how you were relying on links of images to describe your characters, not everyone is going to want to go off searching for what your characters look like. I get a picture is worth a thousand words but no attempt just feels like lazy writing. Also, I wouldn't really call them plot holes but there were a few issues with certain events and characters like; why did none of the brothers aside from the 8th one have a name? Where'd Jean Claude or "Uncle" go?, How did the titan posses the 8th brother as well as get stuck in the statue?, How is it the brothers don't know Greek but still face someone like Medusa, especially with Caleb being a potential descendant of Medusa? Stuff like that draws away from the story as well as the constant A/Ns in the middle of the story. I'm guilty of doing that too so it's not that big of an issue. Otherwise an overall good story, I'm a sucker for mpregs anyways. Thanks for writing.

Nice Story. I really love sub!Harry stories. But I have A question: where ist Jean Claude? You mentioned him in the First few chapters somewhere and then he isn't mentioned again.
Love your story.
Yours O. Ichigo

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I liked your stoy, what would you think of doing another with Harry being with Bill, Charlie, Fred & George? Either as Soulmates or Harry accidentally bonds with each of them the first time they meet?

Bill could see him at the Bank the first time, which would lead to Harry's new Soulmate/Bonded making sure that all of Harry's affairs are in order as Harry's new magical guardian. That Harry gets a full inheritance test, abilities check, and Goblins Healer visit, and not mention why Hagdrid had Harry's Key instead of either Harry or the Bank. Maybe keeping it secret for as long as possible until Harry's older? One so no one will know who Harry's new Guardian is (maybe it could be protected in Harry's mind either through the bond or Gringotts has something to help?) for various reasons and two Molly, Dumbledore, Ginny, and Ron would make a fuss.

Maybe Harry has Bill pick a another Proxie to all his Lords seats? But not one Proxie for all the seats have them spread out. Maybe even over the months to not draw suspension to one person being in charge of all the seats?

Fred & George obviously meet him at the train station (maybe Bills with Harry under a glamour or polyjuice, having had Harry either stay at the leaky or a rented a house/flat near Private Drive still inside Dumbledores 'so called' wards as to not raise suspicions?) And Harry/Bill tell them about the bond as their now apart of it. Bill would feel better knowing his mate wasn't alone. Maybe tell the Twins that as Harry's known future husbands they needed to get their grades up or it would look bad for Harry as hes a future Lord many times over? Not that they can't still open a joke shop, plus charms/transfiguration/potions/runes/arithmeticancy/and eventually spell craft would all help with the joke shop.

Ron I would be the future in law Harry 'tries' to be friends with. Hermione would be a bossy bent that helps Harry learn how to balance by watching her and residing on what Not to do.

Neville is his God brother who could help with teaching Harry (and the Twins) tradition and what to aspect as a future Lord.

Then Harry meets Charlie on the Astronomy Tower (instead of Hermione Fred & George could be there with the map as well) after the Norbert(a) incident. Maybe Bill, Fred & George fill their bonds completely settle and say something like 'finally' they could also tell Charlie to have Bill come over for a visit.

wonderful way to end,. it would be great to see a little bit in the future, but it is great that they are now happy and safe

Can we see what happens with the unicorns? I really liked the direction of your story but the ending felt a tad cut off.

So, Harry never made it back home. At least he has a new family.

good story

wow kudos 2 u. Will u write another story?

Aaash dios mio ya termino :'( es triste pero me encanto demasiado este fanfic si hay una secuela en el futuro créeme que yo seré una de las primeras en leerlo me encanto mucho esta historia.

it was really good thou the break time in the middle I could have been left out. :p

I am glad that Lily was there for Harry when he truly needed her again and now they have destroyed the Titan for good and will have a chance to be happy. Will they stay on the island or will they want to leave it at some point?