This story is so good, the paolini characters are well portrayed, and i love the new characters too!
As an adult that just recently reread the inheritance cycle, i love this storyline way more! Thank you

As according to your wishes, I shall leave my report: it's was amazing!

Have Roran at the wedding

For a small moment I forgot I was reading a fan fiction up until something didn't match with the information in the 5th installment of Christopher's works. I am still deeply enamored with this fanfiction. Hopefully I will remain so until the very end

Having read thousands of fanfictions online (this is not an overstatement) i have found myself quite frustrated with the lack of depth given to both characters and story, I am pleased to say that this is not one such story. Character depth is certainly there while it remains somewhat out of character this is to be expected in any fanfiction. As for the story that is yet to be seen. The writing style is in all honesty one of the best I have read online in a long time, my thanks and respect go out to the writer. Being a adult male it's not difficult to imagine my preferences do not tend towards romantic fanfiction but I'm fascinated by this one and thrilled to find that the attention to detail and descriptive nature of this writing doesn't leave me wanting. Im more then happy to read this and compare its authors skill to that of the writer of the original series, while it surely doesn't match up to Christopher's literary prowess it certainly comes as close as I could hope for. I appreciate the effort put into this. Dear writer/author may peace live in your heart and i hope you are aware that your writing talents beguile more then just teenage girls.

Fírnen rumbled in amusement, and Saphira proudly thought, Yes it israther demanding, is it not? She nuzzled Fírnen with her snout. If only you little ones would be as unfettered by customs and traditions as we dragons, you would already be mated and done with it!
Missed a space

Hello I believe I found a small mistake. Within this paragraph...
Eragon said nothing again for a long while. He eventually stilled his hands in their efforts to warm her and lifted one to sweep his fingers through his hair. This he did only once, perhaps thinking she might interpret the gesture as too affectionate. His heart pounded nervously, but as the minutes passed and Arya made no objections, it slowed to a steady beat that Arya found reassuring.
I believe you meant that Eragon swept his fingers through her hair not his. As that would make more sense with the way you wrote it.

Great story, and well written. The odd quirky bit of grammar, and the rare misspelling, but nothing that serious.
Set in your own universe, rather than Christopher Paolini’s, this could easily contribute to a commercially published work. Well done. I look forward to the other parts of the story.

Amazing writing! I’m not a romance reader so the about of fluff was off putting, but I endured and enjoyed the world building you have started. In regard to Eragon/Arya I think the pacing of there reunion was too fast but as this is a fluff/romance story it’s understandable. I see the Beginnings of some adventure and not pure fluff and it has pulled me in. With W/V I like the premise and you write your OCs perfectly. You capture their struggles and internal monologues to perfection. I know you probably won’t read this since it’s way past the time you have finished but I hope to finish the entire series and leave at least a my likes and dislike.

I finally found this!
I read this a few years ago,and I loved it. But I forgot who wrote this, and I was searching for this.

This story is, and would always be amazing.

It is strange, that I will admit. I myself, being a man, find a little different that I enjoy the concept of romance and even eventually marriage. Along with having kids of course.

I feel like the song "Immortals" fits this book perfectly

Where is the links ?

Oh :) just for information i'm a "male reader" and it's very ... embarrassing? hilarious? amusing? at any rate very unexpected, I like it :P

Good story: just can you correct the word ? "Alagaësia" "ë"