Reviews for Boulevard of Broken Dreams
17298fhaikujdbmfds chapter 1 . 5/20/2018
Name: Chika
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Preferred District: None
Appearance: Long, jet black hair tied in a low ponytail. Leaf green eyes. Looks kind of Japanese. Rather pretty
Build and Height: Slender but strong build. 5 ft 3 in.
Personality: Very quiet, can be extremely loud if necessary, very kind to everyone, even her enemies. She really likes to sing.
Fatal Flaw: You choose
Powers: can summon fire that can heal wounds
Family: Daughter of Hestia, dead father
Friends: Little 10 year oldgirl named Anna who's parents don't care about her. She is basically a little sister.
Reaping Outfit: Refused to wear a dress. She wore long black flare pants, and a long sleeved light green shirt.
Reaped or Volunteered: Volunteered
Reason/Reaction: The girl was really young, and reminded her of Anna
Token: A carved necklace shaped like a flame
Strengths: Very agile and silent. Can run pretty fast. Good at hiding
Weaknesses: Hates any kind of bug. Bad stamina
Costume ideas: tight light green dress embroidered with forest designs. you choose the rest
Interview outfit: You choose, just something green or gold or black
Interview angle: very quiet and seemingly delicate and weak
Private interview skills: good with throwing knives
Bloodbath character? no
Goes to Cornucopia? no
Open to romances? yes
Open to allies? kind of ish not really
WisteriaKitsune chapter 9 . 5/20/2017
I look forward to seeing how you write Kategída. Also it's almost June... you liar. Also Kategída enchants his knives. Something I forgot to mention
SilverWing321 chapter 9 . 5/11/2017
Ah, school. We all know the struggle. I just finished taking an AP exam today (*cries*). Take your time with it - school obviously takes priority, and no one likes a rushed chapter. Good luck on all your projects and stuff, see you when it's over :)
~Silver
SilverWing321 chapter 8 . 4/28/2017
Oh my goodness, I didn't realize you updated! I'm so late!
First things first
MY Reaction when Janelle came: EEEEEEEH! THAT'S MINETHATSMINETHATS MINE AHHHH IM SO HAPPYYYY!
Phew, I had to get that out. I cant wait for Felix to be introduced! On a serious note: once again, the writing was superb. I'm loving the new characters, and to be honest, I'm more intriguiged my the others more than my own
I also LOVE the plot - i would have expected that you'd do the same boring routine, but the train crash was unexpected, and I certainly hope we get more twists like that. ITS SOOO GOOD.
I do have one nitpick - the demigods are all very laid back for a bunch of kids who have been forcibly taken to fight to the death. I would expect them to be being scared or planning escapes - not complaining that the train is boring. Or at least make them be not so complient with the capitol. For that matter, the Capitol is being very lenient too, letting them tour the city and mingle, they ARE still dangerous, surrendered or not.
Nevertheless, I'm still IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY, its so good, and I just love meeting all the characters and arrrghhh I cant WAIT for the next update. I hope it comes soon!
Until then, love,
Silver
P.S. My reaction when I saw your reply to my previous review: I...I have been noticed! YAAAY!
WisteriaKitsune chapter 8 . 4/23/2017
Yes the story begins! I can't wait to see Kat! Love this!
SilverWing321 chapter 7 . 12/28/2016
YEEES! YES YES YES YES YES! YOU STARTED THE STORY! IM SO HAPPY!
And its RALLY REALLY good - you write very well, I loved the way you introduced the characters, and getting to know all of them. They seem dynamic, I can't wait to see more of Sage and the Raman demigod Katia.
Most SYOCs with this many characters are a big mess - the authors try to introduce all the characters all at once, and you just get this giant flood of names and ages and backstories, and the actual plotline just gets lost in all of it - so awesome job not doing that!
I won't lie, on literally on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next, the OCs you featured here all seem really intriguing, and I cant wait to see more of them and meet the new ones.
So overall, AWESOME job, update soon (PLEEEEASE), and keep up the epic work.
All the best,
Silver
WisteriaKitsune chapter 6 . 11/15/2016
Holy carp the Hecate are overwhelming... Joshua Chan, 13, son of trivia, legacy of Athena
SuparUnicorn chapter 6 . 6/13/2016
(I dont know if I already posted this or it didn't work or what, but if I did, use this, but if I didn't, here it is)

Name: Darcy Hawks

Age: 14

Gender: Girl

Preferred District(s): 3, 5, 7

Appearance: Long Light-brown-hair, green eyes

Build and height (in ft. and inches please, if doing height): 5'5 ft

Personality: Funny, sarcastic , athletic, smart

Fatal Flaw: Proud

Powers (if any): Smart

Family (including Godly parent): Athena, brother named Oliver.

Friends: Tyler Smith/ Mia Alexander (both OCs of mine)

Reaping outfit: Simple gray dress

Reaped or volunteered?: Reaped

Reason/Reaction: Shocked

Token: Small gear

Strengths (at least two at most five): Smartness, Fast, Trustworthy, Good at building machines and mechanisms

Weaknesses (same rules as above): Too trusting, not very strong, can get stressed fast

Costume ideas: Your choice

Interview outfit: Your choice

Interview angle (how they want to be perceived as and/or what kind of things they say/do during the interviews): Happy/Funny but with a sob-story

Private interview skills presented/what do they do during them?: Makes a trap and maybe some fighting skills

Anything else?: Knows a lot about edible insects/berries/plants

Bloodbath character?: 'Run away!' Sort of thing

Goes to Cornucopia?: NOP

Open to romances?: No...

Open to allies? If yes, any specifications?: Yes, and no specifications

So here it is! Can't wait till the games start!
SuparUnicorn chapter 1 . 6/7/2016
Hey, is your games open for tributes? If so, heres one for ya! :D

Name: Darcy Hawks

Age: 14

Gender: Girl

Preferred District(s): 3, 5, 7 (please 3!)

Appearance: Long Light-brown-hair, green eyes

Build and height (in ft. and inches please, if doing height): 5'5 ft
Personality: Happy, bubbly, smart, sarcastic, fun, trustworthy, honest, hardheaded, reckless.

Fatal Flaw: Feels the need to protect the innocent

Powers (if any): Smartness!

Family (including Godly parent): GP, Athena. Siblings: Younger Brother Oliver

Friends: Tyler Smith and Tia Plum (both OCs)

Reaping outfit: simple gray dress

Reaped or volunteered?: Reaped

Reason/Reaction: Reaction was sarcasm

Token: A gear from home. (Another reason why I want her to be from D3, please?) May not look like much, but signifies powerful memories (you can make them up if you want to)

Strengths (at least two at most five):
Smart, fast, trusting, can think on her feet

Weaknesses (same rules as above):
Sarcasm always kicks in at the wrong time, a little TOO trusting, proud

Costume ideas: Idek...

Interview outfit: Again Idk...

Interview angle (how they want to be perceived as and/or what kind of things they say/do during the interviews): Jokes, Lovable, 'Capitol is so amazing!' Sorta thing

Private interview skills presented/what do they do during them?: Makes a super cool trap that could trap enemys if they make the slightest movement in an area.

Anything else?: Nop!

Bloodbath character?: 'Theres a dead person, and blood, a soon to be dead person... and their dead...' I guess

Goes to Cornucopia?: Noop!

Open to romances?: NO! Yes... maybe? :S You decide

Open to allies? If yes, any specifications?: Allies YES, Specifications no!

Hope you enjoy working this character into the story! Cant wait to read it! :D
abccourage chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
Name: Aaliyah Carter

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Preferred District(s): 3

Appearance: fiery red hair, black, hazel eyes

Build and height (in ft. and inches please, if doing height): 5'4

Personality: very independent, reliant, doesn't trust people easily. Smart, sarcastic

Fatal Flaw: idk. Anything doesn't matter

Powers (if any): can easily remember things

Family (including Godly parent):
Athena, sister Caylie Carter
Friends: Jason Stryder, Carol Matthews

Reaping outfit:
Tight black jeans and a black tank top
Reaped or volunteered?:
Reaped
Reason/Reaction:
Scared but doesn't show it
Token:
Bracelet my sister gives me
Strengths (at least two at most five):
IDK doesn't matter
Weaknesses (same rules as above):
IDK doesn't matter
Costume ideas:
IDK doesn't matter
Interview outfit:
Pretty long pink dress
Interview angle (how they want to be perceived as and/or what kind of things they say/do during the interviews): they want to be viewed as a person who would do anything for the family and friends

Private interview skills presented/what do they do during them?: bow and arrow, sword skills climbing skills, hands on combat skills

Anything else?:

Yes or no

Bloodbath character?: yes

Goes to Cornucopia?: yes

Open to romances?: yes

Open to allies? If yes, any specifications?: yes
SORRY I COULDNT ANSWER THEM ALL
the Oracle of Akemi chapter 6 . 4/17/2016
I'm glad you decided to continue this!
TheKindredzzz122 chapter 3 . 11/16/2015
hmmm..it seems like the demigod camps and satyrs,etc is pathetic,i mean a satyr is connected to nature right?he should be able to call for help,and the capitol cant beat the demigods since they are powerful. this is not an insult,im just confused so don't get the wrong ur story is good.)
zoesimpson12 chapter 4 . 10/3/2015
plzzzzz post soon
zoesimpson12 chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
Cassia. Daughter of nyx. She can fly and control the mist. She has raven black hair and extremely pale skin and is considered very beautiful. She is sort of short and thin but surprisingly strong. Her fatal flaw is that she has hallucinations of her parents being killed again. Her power is being able to fly, control the mist, and shape shift (she her was blessed by circe). Her non-godly parents were killed by peace keepers so she is an orphan her godly parent is nyx. She has only one friend, a boy that she meet at camp jupiter named emorius he is a child of philotes and they had a very close relationship they kind of were like yin and yang. She volunteered for a girl who was reaped that had narcolepsy that never had a chance. Her token was a small glass ball the size of a marble that was filled with a little bit of the mist. Her strength is the sica and the javalin. Her weakness is that she is deathly afraid of eagles and that she has a very snsitive stomach so she throws up alot. her costume is a black flowing dress that is silver on the edges and leaves a trail of black fire. Her interveiw outfit is a dark red-purple sleeveless dress and her hair in to very long braids. Her interveiw angle is sexy and scary. During her interveiw she tells them the tragic story about her family and she gets a few weaps from the audience. She is very quiet. She does not play much of a part in the bloodbath because she just fly straight into the cornucopia grabs some weapons and a back pack with an empty water bottle a sleeping bag and some food and leaves and makes camp in a far off tree. She is a non-career even though they want her to join. She is open to romances. She is open to allies preferably with 12,13,11,3 and 6
SilverWing321 chapter 4 . 9/12/2015
Take your time writing, but PLEASE don't neglect the story, that's always sad when an author does that :( anyway, I look forward to the next chapter!
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