Very sweet and I love Yami Marik in this.

I never read deathshipping before, but I don't know, I just kind of like this. Really. And hey! I didn't even know it was your story until I read the bottom aithor note and was familiar with one of the stories! XD

I love the setting, the tone, and for a scene that's supposed to be in the middle of a war, it sure was calm when Ryou was recalling those memories. It felt as if everything slowed down. It's either just me, or I read the story wrong, lol. But, whatever, I like it.

Great job! :D