I really enjoy this! I have read this several times and I love it even more each time!

I am just not having an OC joining on Ash on his journey. Too many Pokémon are wanting to join him without a fight, bit of a cliche.

500th review yay. Awesome story with even better quotes. Especially that bitch is a bitch one it was awesome. This story could only be be better if it was amour shopping.

Wow! This is a interesting and exciting story! I would really like to see Ash catch a Growlithe in the squeal, because Archnine are my favorite fire type. I'm looking forward to the next story.

shouldnt it be Wild Duck Pokemon not Wild "Dick" Pokemon?

hi I would like to know if ash is going to catch the charmander, bulbasuar, squirtle from the first anime season

This was the best Pokemon I have read. I can't wait for more if you planned on another story I'll be following right along with it

It is stories like this that make me wonder why there are no SI-Ash/Fem Ash fanfiction or Crossover character reincarnated as Fem Ash. Keep in mind that Ash could learn how to speak with Pokemon should he master his Aura, It IS a Canon ability not to mention the other canon ways such as the magic girl from Johto, Anabel's psychic powers and N's ability to communicate with a Pokemon's Heart. I also believe that there are multiple versions of most legendaries out there. That is how Tobias had a Darkrai and a Latios when Ash has previously encountered other members of their species before. That movie with Hoopa also showed that their are multiple legendaries such as the Shiny Rayquaza, the Primal Groudon and Primal Kyogre. I think that the only legendary pokemon that their are only one of is Dialga, Palkia, Giratina, Arceus and possibly Megearna due to it's artificial nature. I really wonder as to just WHY Ash doesn't ask Professor Oak if he could transfer Pikachu from a Poke Ball to a Luxury Ball. That would have solved the whole Poke Ball dilemma should an emergency occur where Ash has to return Pikachu.

i'll glad i stuck with this story and read through to it's end. it's got a good bases and character portrayal that most Pokemon stories lack. however, whilst these last couple of chapters are clearly better written, the enter story is riddle with spelling and typo mistakes that made it hard to read. especially if you've left hanging sentences. i would suggest just having someone go over it. the hardest thing in the world sometimes is to proof read our own work.

i look forward to the orange island story.

Great fanfic! Do you know of any others like this?

So has Louise not trained at all with her Squirtle? You haven't mentioned any training at all. This story has really gone down hill.

Why is them making it to Viridian in a day a big deal? Ash did that when he first went there and he walked, they are now on bikes! Louise is such a terrible character! She brings absolutely nothing to the story except being a moron who just slows things down all because you either want her to be Ash's girlfriend, which is stupid because you know he is 11. Or because you want their parents to get together and for them to be brother and sister which is weak.

Ugh please don't have him travel with people! It's soooooo boring and is like every other story out there! Plus that chick adds nothing to the story and will only slow Ash down!

Also your quotes in the beginning are terrible and sound like shitty books. Maybe reading better books will help improve your own stories.

Chinese and Italian? There is no China or Italy in the Pokemon world. That's one of the many reasons you need a beta reader for this story! It would be a lot simpler because you have already completed it. A lot of people get turned off a story because of mistakes so it would be in your best interest to fix them.

Dratini is a Dragon type only not water and dragon and nidoking is a ground and poison type not just poison so why would ash even use an electric type attack on it?