THIS PART IS STILL MY FAVOIRTE! I see you took my advise :)

There is BAD Fan Fiction, there is REALLY BAD Fan Fiction, and there is THIS. Do you even watch the show you write about?

No offense intended, but this is really, really bad. You’ve include multiple OC’s that serve zero purpose, you’ve altered the personalities of the CC’s to the point where they are totally unrecognizable, and you’ve written an AU without warning the reader that it is AU. AND to top it all over you’ve written this in multiple 1st person POV’s that switch for no reason and it’s basically in script format, which makes it next to impossible to follow. This is terrible.

You really should warn people that is AU, because it’s totally AU and has NOTHING to do with the universe of “Mako: Island of Secrets”, other authors do AU (some worse, some better), but at least they warn the reader, you don’t, which you should, because this work has NO resemblance to the show and is one of the worst examples of Fan Fiction I’ve ever come across.

this was so good i really enjoyed it keep up the great work!

how many movies have you combine in this?

So much death... Ugh, I hope they'll be okay...

But oh god, that ending... Better than I could've ever imagined... except for maybe the deaths.

#Thalie&Raiden4Life

I'm a sucker for romances. It has been such a thrilling story, and although I'm dejected that it has ended, I'm so very happy for Thalie and Raiden's love. They are so cute together... This is one of the best books I've ever read, and I'm SO looking forward to a sequel! And maybe a sequel series, too? *mischievous smile* I wish this story ended, but it's a long story (even though it felt like I read it in seconds). Caught up in the moment, right?

I do sincerely hope that the others will be okay. And I think I learned a few things, one among them being: OCs are not all bad, if you give them a chance. And I loved all of the characters even though I still love the original Mako characters.

~Darkwind

Adrenaline is seriously pumping through my veins... Down with Slade!

"She's alive?" "Well, you know, most of her."

What happened to Evie?!

YES! Never give up! #OndinaandErik ;( I hope no one dies. I mean, 'Battle for Mako,' yeah... It sounds dangerous... and exciting! Exhilarating...

;) Love the way you translate languages. So sad that Legacy is almost over. ;( Oh my god, so many questions, so many ways the outcome will turn out... Also, I love how you add Mandarin Chinese to this. ;)

Raiden and Thalie are so adorable! They are seriously one of the cutest couples ever! The others are okay, too. ;) Gosh, this story is gripping!

"The best gift of all is hope." What a blissful line...

Waterworks... I'm getting the feels!

Oh my God... This story is utterly captivating... thrilling yet suffocating in a certain way... Oh wow... ;)

Dream sharing? Wow... That's actually quite similar to what I was going to write for my own book. I just absolutely love the way you end chapters—even if it can be a bit infuriating that the chapter ended. Nonetheless, it's a good, lengthy amount, more than I would write for a chapter.

OMG. Lyla is Veridia's daughter. This is... Ohhh, I'm going to need a moment. Oh, for the soul of St. Vladimir's. This is absolutely shocking... in the good way, of course. I enjoy intrigue and suspense.

OMG. 'What is to come when one of the original 3 mermaids makes a return?' AHHHHH! Please let it be Lyla. She is no doubt my favorite. I like Nixie, but OMG. The suspense is killing me!

'I'm sorry but the last bit of information there about Weilan will not be revealed until the next book.'

Now, that I've finally come to my sense: Ugh! That just makes me more desperate than I already am-and I'm VERY desperate-for the next book. This is... too amazing to be real *faints*