I know that you have stopped writting this for one year but plase can you update at least the 2 remaining origin stories? You seem you have fantacy and the affairs that have hapened thus far are quite maching with their personalities ( at least for what we saw on TLOK)...Uuummm...If you want I could give you some ideas if you havent ones (I doupt for the last one). Please update!

Hi!

So you have finally started the prequel? Great!
The first chapter I can still recall from "Assault on the South" - yet it is understandable why you've put up this very chapter here again. Anyway, "Reeducation" thereby, was the real surprise in here - especially since I would have never imagined by reading "Assault on the South" that Ghazan and Ming-Hua actually had an affair - as short-lived as it may be.
And now I even know why Ming-Hua is "sick and tired of hearing Ghazan's shit over and over again" :) Although, I still find this very statement of her quite grateless- I cannot imagine he would let many people in on his story about his own personal hell, yet she doesn't seem to appreciate his trust. It DOES depend on how many times he had already told her, yes but ... hmh. Let's say it that way: Ming-Hua might be not very charming sometimes (and her affair with Ghazan was obviously an one-off due to the heat of the moment) ... and I tend to overlook that sometimes, I suppose. Like I said: Hopeless Mingzan-shipper.
You surely created a very dark past for both Ghazan and Zaheer - even though, Ghazan's is even worse - and the outcome really made sense as to why they decided to join the Red Lotus in the first place.
The reeducation camp was indeed gruesome, especially if one does consider the historical context. But did Ghazan really kill his brother accidentally?
I'm just wondering: When Ghazan and Zaheer got it so bad ... do I really want to know what P'Li and Ming-Hua have been through?

Looking forward to a continuation, though!
~Elvira