Aww, I loved it! Cute fic for May and Drew's Expedition!

What a wonderful story! I could definitely see this happening in the animé.

There aren't a lot of great stories in Drew's POV for this ship, but you pulled it off extremely well. I think you portrayed May and Drew's characters perfectly, making them obviously older and more mature, while retaining their personalities. I really liked how you made sure to not write May as ridiculously dense, because no one actually receives red roses from a guy and doesn't consider that he might like them. The storyline was cute, without being terribly cliché. Drew not being able to win May the doll was definitely a smart move. Overall, you did a great job with this story. And nice Lyra and Ethan cameo (or Crystal and Gold, whatever).

So sweet! A very good story :) I love how you used 'May's expedition' for effect. The way you described his hair flicking signature move as something originating from a nervous habit was clever. I also liked how giving roses was described as something he did to cover up uncertainties. In general, your interpretations of their behavior and relationship were great :)

Soo cute

awww3 I felt lots of butterfrees while reading this