I wish the password was I solemly swear I am up to no good. That wouldve been a rather nice touch.

Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next and to see what happens when he is headmaster

I read your other story but to be honest, while it’s really good and well thought out, I feel like they’re two different stories :( I really liked where you were going with this story and I really wanted to see Harry and Ron make up. And see everyone’s reaction to Harry being head master. :(

It’s your story though and that was just my opinion. Your writing did get better in the other story and the idea is good. I hope I’m not discouraging you. I just wanted you to know.

Keep writing tho! You have great ideas!

Kairi

Well this was interesting

Will there by a continuation please ?

honestly this one is better then the rewrite you did. They seem like two different stories.

NOOOO! I loved this so much but it’s abandoned?! How could you! This is madness, I say, MADNESS!

I would love for someone to continue this story, its amazing

Actually, you know what? My mind did something stupid...I had just been reading a different fanfic where Harry WAS in third year, and somehow I forgot how your story started, and so I got the two confused.

Please, please, PLEASE disregard my last review! It was completely my mistake! My foolish brain mixed things up and made me write an absolutely false review. I think this story is great, honestly! Just ignore my last post (I’ll go hide under the bedclothes in shame now...)

I haven’t read the whole story yet, but I certainly plan to because I’m really, really loving it!

Just a small thing:
In Chapter 2, at the end when Lady Hogwarts is speaking with Harry about what he thinks is wrong with the school, he talks about the DADA teachers, and creatures getting in when they shouldn’t, etc. However, he also talks about Not-Moody, who was never detected. I don’t know how you’re ordering events in your story, but the problem is, in reality, Not-Moody was present for the Tri-Wizard Tournament during Harry’s 4th year, but he is currently still only in 3rd year (Remus teaching, and Sirius running around avoiding Dementors). Maybe I somehow missed a time skip, but in my mind, Harry is still a 3rd year (because Umbridge is there too), so how could he know about Not-Moody yet?

Other than that, I haven’t seen anything wrong. I’m off to finish reading the rest of it now!

GODDAMIT! I LIKED THIS STORY!

Your re-write isn't a re-write , it is in no way similar to this in fact the only thing that is the same is that Harry gets rid of the pink toad and even then it's using different methods.

sorry you have given up on this story, I really enjoyed it. I read your re-write first, and I think the old story, this one, flows much better and is more coherent and more engaging than the re-write. Good luck with your writing and thanks for sharing.

good luck

I love your stories! Keep up the good work. (inserts like sign)