Sumamente tierno,debo admitir que estoy tan acostumbrada a la escritura donde había más intimidad pero esta lectura ea refrescante y muy linda.

i love this story in its entirety and have read it quite a few times, but just wanted to say i love this talk between rogue and jellal here. very sweet and vulnerable and adds dimension to the story.

I enjoyed reading it very much.
solid story and very convincing ,all praise here ...

So I started reading this fic just after 3am. It's almost 5am and I've just finished it. I have no regrets. I loved it. Jerza is one of my OTPs. Ultear teasing Jellal was funny too :P

Of all men in fairy tail, you chose Bacchus to be Erza's dead husband? What is wrong with you? They weren't even a coup,e nor did they have any romantic feelings towards each other. I would have understood if you chose Gray or even Natsu because of their relationship with Erza in the anime.

Waaah, this chap brings back painful memories of their ambiguous kiss in FT!

Thanks for this lovely story though!

I never read AUs. They just don't entertain me or capture my interest. Yours, however, I did not hesitate to read, and I'm so happy for that fact. The story is exactly what I suspected given your summary: absolutely precious. Well done.

This is the third of your stories that I have had the pleasure of indulging in, and this is the third time I've said to myself "This is the greatest story of all time!" I will continue to read religiously if you continue to write!

'I'm gonna love this story.' Is the first thing I thought as I finished this chapter. Wonderful!

Jellal... not Jaleel... my bad. I had a Family Matters moment.

I don't know why, but the way you write Jaleel has me kind of in love with him already. I also love the way you write children. A lot of the times it's TOO cute, or TOO obnoxious, but you tap into it just right. (That's what she said.) Moving on!

This was cute! I like how you had different characters play out in this story.

This was quite the interesting twist on the series and I loved it :D Not often you get to read a mature story of this style (Mature in that it is more adult feeling than childish, you know? Though some aspects got REALLY close to Mature ;) )

There aren't actually anything about it that I can think of as a reviewing critic. Maybe that proves how good a read it was :P

Keep up the great writing :)

Just re read this. It's a great story, again, I love how you portrayed Jerza and their feelings for each other. Good luck with your other stories! Keep writing and stay cool! :-)
Jerza is bae
~Anemone

I like this! :D