Reviews for The Ruler of Winter Rock
Guest chapter 21 . 9/1/2017
Please continue! This is an awesome story what happens next?
Rising from the Ashes YOLT chapter 21 . 12/10/2016
Scary!~
BlackNoblesse chapter 21 . 3/24/2016
Yay~ more please~
Red Phoenix 16 chapter 21 . 3/9/2016
Update please this is a really good story
Deleted Account 23456765432 chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
Luwig: You can't take the girls.
Ivan: What about the boys?
Ludwig: Oh, you can take the boys. That's fine.

XD I'm sorry, I'm cruel, I know
SJK09 chapter 21 . 12/15/2015
I really like how you used the concept of "becoming one" in that way. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! :D
Guest chapter 21 . 12/15/2015
God... Those two last chapters were soooooo hot! J I know I'm a bad person but I do really love seeing Alfred molested and distressed... I think I feed of that as much as Ivan! ;) And the whole "fusion" and "mental control" thing is REALLY HOT.

Apart from that, I like more and more the personality you gave to Ivan... Sometimes kind, and sometimes authoritative and cold; he really is a mysterious character, and I especially love the depths you gave to his character (the multiple allusions to his past are well-done!). I wonder what are his real intentions : of course, he didn't controlled himself when he attacked Alfred, but at the same time, I'm not sure that even 'sobber" he has such "good" motives. I mean, he wants to "taint" Alfred, and that's not nice, is it? I do not know if he means it in a sexual or in a moral way, but in either case, it's a bit controversal to say the least... and it makes their relationship that much interesting and ambiguous.

Good luck, and keep going!
sasunaru13 chapter 21 . 12/15/2015
Ohmg ok im totally tricked with the title like when we become one here is just ivan telling what will happen when they did become one..not really the event itself haha, you sure are great at leading the readers on~ but i know it will take a while before Alfred accepts Ivan so I kinda predict that wont happen in this chapter haha
Anyway glad to see this update! And cant wait to see the full set soviet siblings in the next chapter~
sasunaru13 chapter 20 . 12/12/2015
Aaaaaaaa cliffhanger ;_; you really know where to put it huh, hahahahaa... God I hope Ivan will snap out of it soon... please please please...
sasunaru13 chapter 19 . 12/12/2015
Oooooo I love where this is goingggg
sasunaru13 chapter 18 . 12/12/2015
I'm crying when Toris says impotent...lmaoooo Hod you're genius. I think you're the only writer I've ever known in fanfictiond realm who can mix serious plotline and add sprinkle of amusing humour in it. Usually the author can only write all serious plot and no humor, or all humour with light settings, but you always can mix both of them seamlessly. Oh and also sexiness. You're really an amazing writer seriously
sasunaru13 chapter 17 . 12/12/2015
Oh No...was Arthur like...Amelia's past lover or affair or something...nooo...
sasunaru13 chapter 16 . 12/12/2015
Oooo... RusAme vs UKUS...
sasunaru13 chapter 15 . 12/12/2015
Aaaa thanks for mentioning me! It's an honor really :')
And Glad to know my reviews encourage you to continue writing that's because that's the least I can do for you as a reader :)
Also, I love how Alfred always says 'Not Ready' and not a straight 'No' since that means he considers it. Aaaa i am so happy!
sasunaru13 chapter 14 . 12/12/2015
This world need more dark matt! So interesting
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