i love this story! can’t wait for you to update it!

ha

Oscura sure is amazing smart

This was such a descriptive chapter

Love how you wrote silver, and congras on getting into the best of the best!

Of course he's a mute. ALL of the great ones are mutes, aren't they?

that was such an amazing descriptive start

So how many fedoras do you own?

Aww Lyra is so cute! You mispelled her name as "Myra" in the last sentence though...
I liked the "do they both know sign language" detail about Lyra and Ethan.

Nooooooo! Rattata isn't top percentage anymore ;n;

Is Joey going to sweep through them with his top percentage rattata?

Marza and Oscura getting involved in the events of HGSS? That's not exactly what I expected, but alright. Go Marza! (i.e. keep up your good work with this story!)

The Character at the end... It's Silver isn't it, they're in jonto near new bark town are they not? Regardless of the answer, keep up the good work.

That random kid who was following her is Silver! I swear he is!
Also, he's kind of a butt head with all the 'weakling' and 'goody-two-shoes' stuff he's spouting. I wonder what pokemon he's going to steal?

darn I ran out of story to read again. oh well, the past few chapters have been interesting, if very very short.