loved the story

thank you for writing his story. i love it, love the progress of the story and the characters especially he wards. love how they go therapy. 10/10 well done.

okay i really like it. i knew grant wasn't gonna die for real. i love he gramzy scene, really amazing, lovely scene. great job

i really really like this chapter especially Christian character, evil bastard, spot on. great work

i really like this chapter, i kinda of suspect Christian was behind a scheme. i really like how you wrote Christian's character in this chapter. well done.

i like it. really nice chapter love the characters who are not really dead. well done.

chloe bennet. she has two great songs. under the name chloe wang. um you didnt make clear if lincoln and skye were dating. or if skye cut her hair. i think skye name should have been daisy like in the tv series. great chapter. good cliffhanger. well done

i love it. it was really great chapter, especially skyeward scene. well done.

really nice chapter. especially the vault and skyeward relationship.

you said skyeward when skye asked may about ward. i love how the story is progessing.

really nice cliffhanger. great chapter.

this is my favourite chapter. well done, love the bonding scene.

really good chapter

i really like it

like this chapter. especially ward siblings.