I didn't know I needed this, but thank you for writing this adorable piece. I'm off to read part 2! Thanks again!

I know it's far too late but in HP canon, muggles cannot see Dementors. Only magicals and squibs can. Mrs. Figg was a witness to the attack on Harry and Dudley.

...And there's the obligatory Anglophobia seen in many Harry Potter fanfics where Harry goes to America. I'm starting to think you watch Mel Gibson movies.

I don't claim to be a quiditch expert (I don't even know how to spell it), but I'm pretty sure the seekers don't help the chasers.

Wait, if Harry wasn't born '...as the SEVENTH MONTH dies...' why did Voldemort attack him and his parents? The prophecy was the only reason for this whole 'Harry has no parents' plot. Also, WHY is there so much Dumbledore bashing?

Disgust, all Harry Potter fan fiction with Manipulative!Dumbledore, Jackass!Ron, and Harry learning more from his godfather Sirius, known for getting into shit tons of trouble with Harry's dad, than he did at Hogwarts must have Harry getting a harem. It's practically a staple of all cliched Harry Potter fan fiction.

I often restrain from leaving a review til I finding the entire fic, in case it's something that changed and/or it explained later on. But I couldn't help it, and I have gotta give you some constructive criticism.
One thing I've noticed if you don't add ed to the end of words, like you use "he smile at her" when it should be "he smiled at her".
"He smile at her" could be used if it was something that was going to happen, "he would smile at her a lot in the days come, being so thankful." (Idk what that sentance is tho)
But then you'd use smiling for "he WAS smiling" or something in present tense. Just some advice to keep in mind.
Keep this is mind for most verbs; remembered, confused, grinned, leaped, frowned, ducked, etc. So again idk if this is fixed later on, but it was just bugging me whilst I read the earlier chapters :)

I love the plot, and the characters, and in general I've enjoyed reading it so far! - Have a nice day! (Or night)

just a small hint - rather than 'site' as in the location of a construction site, the word that applies here is 'sight' as in the sense and the perception of visual information. Again, it's only minor but it may result in the confusion of some readers.

Uh Oh panic mode panic mode!

I think having Harry as Riley's neighbor is a good and great idea.

That was awesome but I hate the portkey I really really do.

That is very very cool.

Wow that is really awesome.

this is GREAT!

Why is harry such a... coward in cannon he doesn't have anything close to these issues and only when he sees someone die do we really see a impact, you don't need a panic attack every third chapter to keep people interested it's actually a turn off