Umm why not just have Harry gather the hallows? He already has one and Dumbledore has another.

Pls make note

Ugh i dont think i can read anymore of this. So cring, clique and tiresome. Hell, some parts are confusing to read

Great work on the inside of the mind in this chapter.

Good plot, but needs a lot of editing in order to make it more engaging... And by that I mean the grammar mistakes and awkward wording prevented me from getting lost in the story.

This is a very intresting story pls make more

This is confusing to read :/

Sigh, it's a really bad idea to update if you're suffering under a severe writer's block. What a completely pointless chapter.

Two opposite souls in the same body...yeah like that's not going to cause problems at all lol.

good idea with the update schedule.
however i hope for the six week update schedule so we readers get longer chapters

It sucks that this is a part of the whole so I will need toa wait onger for the rest. Otherwise this was a good chapter as we get to see Sal's life some.

Lovely

I think you should come up with something with why he hate Fluer so much. Maby in his world when he was underwater she used her power on the merpeople and it cuased him much pain and issues. Maby he had to kill one to save himself and he blames her for it.

Not bad I am enjoying the fic so far and I was wondering if Sal and Harry will have different love interest?

Jesus. What problem do you have with using damn big capitals, I wonder...