This story started off so beautifully and I hope that it hasn't been abandoned forever because to see how Roy and Raven's relationship progress after that bombshell that he just dropped. Hope you update soon.

This is a great story. I enjoy that you have given each a accurate role according to the show and comics. Really great so please keep writing!

Are you not going to finish? Rude

The last part made me laugh! Haha please continue this, you're fic is pretty good

I know you're still active on here based on your updates from your other stories..so iknow you'll see this...please update and don't abandon this story...it gave me butterflies in my stomach c:

More please! Xx

Oh, gosh... I don't know how I feel about this yet! It's so good! You've done a great job with the characters, and keeping Roy in-tact personality-wise, but some of the things sort of feel glossed over. Like his relationship with his secretary or his relationship with Chesire. It's not necessarily a bad thing if you revisit the situation maybe later in the story, but it does feel like everything moves a bit too quickly, and it's okay to slow it down.

Additionally, I think this story would have felt a bit better with some build up before he confessed his feelings. Maybe a coffee date? Maybe a long conversation somewhere private (her office, at his apartment, at his office, etc.) where they had the time to waffle feelings back and forth over each other. I'm not entirely sure about other readers, but I know that personally I love that long tension back and forth before the confession, that kind where you wanna just reach in the screen and punch the characters because they're being stupid. I love that feeling.

Anyway, the point of all of this is, I really, really, really like this story, but I feel like it would do really well if you slowed it down a bit and drew out the interactions, but so far it's a great read and I really look forward to seeing where you take this.

Continue! continue! continue! its so goooooooddd!

Keep up the good work. I still love this story.

I love it ! Please contuine it and delevop it .

I am loving this story so far. I hope this story goes on for awhile.