I liked this a lot.

Love this story, read it and the other one over and over. I only have one thing, and I'm surprised it didn't hit me before. Sure that fatal shot came from Gibbs gun, but wasn't it Tim firing said gun at some point? It still could have been him.

Anyway, I don't remember that coming up in later chapters, though Tim did kill all the rest so emotionally, it probably doesn't matter much. (Maybe it does come up and it's been awhile since I've read this, so I just don't remember. Lol)

Keep writing. Love Tim H/C

How very good. I'm glad that Gibbs was able to accept Tim's "difference" and that he made sure that Tim knew he accepted it. Thank you!

Interesting tying up of the story.

I did wonder how the handcuffs were undone and the feeling of warmth back in the warehouse.

Firestarter-plus! Or a Xman? Either way, I loved it.

I'm really enjoying the story, the way you portray Gibbs and McGee is spot on. Lovin the friendship aspect too, and the "special ability" is agreat twist to story, perfect for McGee.

This was good, I didn't expect the ending. For all that Tim & Gibbs went through, all the angst & injuries, to have it end like this worked for me. The two of them, sitting on the dock fishing & joking was so apropos. It was nice, Thank-you.
But your story has me wondering. There's so much left unsaid, so much more to explore, so many people yet to include in Tim's secret, and oh so much left to explain. There's so much more to this story, isn't there? The way you left it so completely open leaves me to believe that you're planning a series. Are you? Because if you are, with this subject & hope you expertly set things in motion, it would be epic. This story could take on a life of it's own! You could go anywhere with this.
I can see it now... if it were me writing this, I would... oh Hell, I'll PM you with the rest.
Thank-you for sharing this story with us. I really hope you plan to continue it, it's screaming for more.

Such a sweet ending (if such a world can be applied to Gibbs). I'm so glad Tim finally got some unconditional acceptance.

Tim's talents are even more extraordinary than they appeared to be in the story "Fire and Ice". I thought he could manipulate fire and ice - which is remarkable itself, but apparently he can manipulate matter as well. What a talent to possess!

Good ending to this story.

Thank you very much, I really enjoy your stories. Nice pacing and tone, very good indeed.

Great ending! Love the cabin and Tim taking Gibbs there to reveal his secret...would love to see a sequel where Tim has to use his powers on the job again with Gibbs!

Loved Tim's hidden talent

Glad the guys survived this latest attempt on their lives.

Hanging on the edge of "whaaaaaaat!?"

That's one of the best paragraphs ever written about Gibbs (opening paragraph). I know they emphasize the desk slamming, bellowing Gibbs-but after umpteen years in customer service, I can tell you the louder you yell at me, the lower you go on my list.

Dying to find out Tim's secret.