Reviews for Loyalty
Snaperipper chapter 1 . 9/17
Great story. I usually don't read Voldemort wins unless it is time travel fixes. but this was really good!
H chapter 1 . 9/15
Wow. This is one of the best one shots I have read. It’s haunting and yet liberating. I generally shy away from reading stories where Voldemort wins and Hermione suffers tremendously, but went ahead with this one since it’s you writing (loved the Hermione/Slytherin story) and it was a one shot where there wouldn’t be any graphic descriptions of torture and such. Glad I did. A few more words relating to her parents, changes she made to society, her homage to her dead friends would have made it even better, if even more haunting in some ways. That was quite an impactful story really. Thanks.
akwardllama chapter 1 . 6/10
I did not expect to like this, but your lovely writing and way with words has made me love it. It is reverse Stockholm syndrome and it’s fantastic
c.karen09 chapter 1 . 4/27
Very well done. Thanks for writing.
hzntc chapter 1 . 4/27
Absolutely love the progression of the story! The dynamic between the characters is well written despite of the subtlety and conciseness of the story. Characters are written realistically and stayed true to their source material. Outstanding work, its really a rare occurrence to find a plausible and perfect fanfic of this unusual pairing. Would definitely reread this again someday!
Masayume91 chapter 1 . 3/19
Good story, thanks for writing this!
RaseyafromRavenclaw chapter 1 . 12/26/2019
Oh jeez.
KashiZii chapter 1 . 12/6/2019
WOW
GhostsYou chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
right so, I actually cried. this is written so well i just cant contain myself honestly
Shaslayyy chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
Oh man! That was great! I've never really been into crouch and Hermione but damn. You're setting new ships to sale. Love the dynamic and the little excerpts you give of her changing his mind about people. I'm of my favorite lines from Unsphere the Stars is 'people without magic are still people's and I just love how she undies him! Killiiiiiiiiin it!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2019
Amazing
sfescher chapter 1 . 4/10/2019
Wow, this was great! The first fic I've ever read with Barty Crouch, Jr. in it. I like that the story really focuses on his character. The exact timeline of the events was slightly difficult to follow, but it didn't detract too much. Pointing out the ridiculousness of his GoF plot was a nice touch. I don't know if this was intentional, but the way he apologized to Hermione reminded me a bit of The Doctor. I never expected a Barty story would be this interesting, but you've done an amazing job!
Nanyin chapter 1 . 1/11/2019
this is brilliant. thank you for sharing
Babaksmiles chapter 1 . 1/7/2019
Absolutely amazing. It was beautiful and heartbreak and hope all wrapped into a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it!
aquillamythos chapter 1 . 11/23/2018
This was a stunning take on an unexpected pairing that I really enjoyed.
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