Even tho is says 2015, I shall have hope

this chapter was AWESOME!

damn this one has such good potential. I hope you eventually come back to this story.

hmm. First no one tried to kill Naruto in canon. There’s a difference if I decide to outright ignore someone than to kill someone. Secondly Bee was mistreated just like Naruto in kumo. Kumo is not any better place for a jinchuuriki. Third Ay should not be paired with Kushina. The same guy who’s father tried to kidnap and turn you into a mindless weapon and the same guy who tried to kill your husband unprovoked. So messed up.

Read over 500 fanficitons. This is top 20 worst. 20 line paragraphs of text is impossible to read without getting lost in the text. As for plot you are so your willing to waive off the pedophilia and kidnapping of the raikages and turn them into OOC characters? please don’t call the raikages honorable. This is just so illogical. Those Kushina have Stockholm syndrome? cuz going to a village that tried to turn you into a weapon/ extract bijuu from you, tried to kill your husband who didn’t provoke you, definitely seems like something I would definetly do let alone Kushina. This is just a copycat of “N of Kumo” added with an alive Kushina and Naruto given 100 power ups so young and much of the plot doesn’t even focus on him. this needs to be deleted. D

You butchered the raikages from shameless pedos that kidnap children into some OOC variant, and for the love of God MinaKushi is the only acceptable thing. bring him back with say Rinne Tensei.

Kushina and Ay pairing is disgusting. Period. So fucked up. Your so messed up. Ay is such an asshole in canon the way he played down kidnapping a 3 year old baby Hinata to be used as a baby factory as a “minor past transgression”, there is no FUCKING shot Kushina even is remotely similar to and should like Asshole Ay. Not to mention Third Raikage was going to do the same thing to Kushina as his bastard son would have done to Hinata if it weren’t for Minato. Goddam you. You basically flipped the Raikage personalities 180 and turned them into father figures and in that case just pair Kushina with some OC as this point.

This story had potential. But Ay and Kushina pairing killed any interest.

This fic as so fucking garbage. And the pairings? I hope your dead. I fucked your mother so hard she was comatose on the floor. I rubbed that bitch's face in her puddle of drool. Fuck you piece of failure. Your mother once confessed that she wished she aborted you.

Thia novel has potential sadly it's dropped

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Plzz update

I feel like that clan of animal Transormation users is a wink to the Zoan fruit users from One Piece. The eagle clan sounded kind of like Lord of the Rings. Didn't know about the White Fang clan until I read one comment about the Witcher.

Please update this soon please

that was good keep the chapters coming