AHHHH I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS UPDATE FOREVER! OMG I was so happy to see the update in my inbox and it did not disappoint! That kiss, wooo boy! * fans self* I'm loving your characterization of Natsu and Lucy and everyone it's seems very natural! I can't wait for the next chapter! Fantastic Job!

One of the things i really love about this story is the characterizations of each character!They truly feel canon! Particularly Natsu's and i feel like his character is particularly difficult to grasp on to.
Also the loved the party and Gray seeking Lucy's advice. They're actually one of my favourite friendships in the guild.
And finally u absolutely love how you write nalu!because
I'm really curious about the vision Lucy saw and even dreamt about though. Really excited to see how you move with that!

Very good!

Nice to have you back looking forward to more. Really curious to what is happening to Lucy. And seeing their reactions to what happen once they sober up.

Loving the story so far, I can't wait for the next update!

omg this was too good ... ugh we love strong powerful women

Oh I like this I like this. I forgot to review the last time I read this. update soon.

The prologue is really an attention getter. Leaving the reader wanting to know what has lead to it.
Lol at Natsu trying to force feed Lucy the berries. And a battle of the sexes.

Good thing Master thought ahead to make things fairer for the girls so they couldn’t be found so easily. Poor Lucy, always getting teased. Wendy being able to smell the pheromones off of the other girls is hilarious. Payback is a bitch girls.

Nice bonding moment between Lucy and Juvia.

Stella seems nice, but that nightmare Lucy had the next day makes me feel there is more to her.

Wonder what Lucy’s connection with boy in her dream was to make her see from his perspective.

Lol at the boys falling apart when the girls plan hits them full force.

Shouldn’t Freed and Bixslow gone straight back to the guild after being kissed out? They shouldn’t have been able to mention anything about the girls to the others.

Things got hot and steam with Gajeel and Levy.

I’m just loving the guys quiver in fear of even thinking of confronting Erza.

Was it really right of Lucy and Natsu to take those coins? Lucy outsmarts Natsu after an epic mud fight. The girls really pulled the wool over the boys’ eyes.

You did a fantastic job in writing the games and the story as a whole.

please update this story it has got so interesting and im hooked and can't wait any longer. This has so much potential and im very excited to see more of what it brings.

please update soon it's so good seeing the reactions!

I'm really enjoying this story so far! I love the subtle tension you have going between Natsu & Lucy and I really liked the capture the flag. If I didn't know better I'd say Markarov set the girls up to win, haha. But seriously great story and I can't wait for the next update!

More pretty please with a cherry on top! This is amazing!

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OMG this is amazing! By far my favorite nalu story I've read so far! Hope to see more soon!

Oh my god I can't wait until you update. The finally scene made me fucking giggle like crazy and I'm loving the development between the characters *wink wink*