I think you should have this tagged as complete.

I like to think the you have been writing the story for 5 years now and will post it randomly at any moment so that its a finished story...

I can only hope :(

This is far two good to just have 2 chapters. This isnt a twoshot. This is an unfinished story that happens to have 2 chapters and called a twoshot.

MORE! WE NEED MORE!

You left me wanton more!

Update

chants with Cybertek13666: do it, do it, do it

Slow demonic chanting from your closet: Update, update, update, update

This has to become an actual story...I'd love to see where this could go since they I believe are still working for cinder. It was only Roman who betrayed them.

You should continue and finish this, your a great wrighter and this is a unique fanfic

You really should make this into a bigger story. It's wonderfully written and I haven't seen anything even close to to a mute Ruby in any of the hundreds of stories I've read. You have created something wonderful here and I for one would see it a a great shame if the story ended here.

lease update soon

Will you ever continue you this

This is awsome please make more

Okay this was really good. I really enjoyed reading this and totally wouldn't mind at all if this became an actual story instead of just a two-shot. This was a great read!

please write on

I know I've read this before, a lot, but I like it. I would like to see more to it, personally, but it's still great to read.
~Haley Earthstone